-羊羔毛
2012
写作话题专练（七）
七、环境、健康
（环保、疾病、食品健康等）
（一）例文审题
节约资源
,
保护环境
.
从我们身边的小事做起，
假设你是一个注重
“
低碳
”
生活的中学生
,
请以
“My
Low
-
carbon Life”
为题，写一篇短文，简单描述自己的
“
低碳生活
”
。
提示
:
(1)
每天步行上学
;
(2)
离开教室时，关灯、电扇、电视等；
（
3)
不用水时
,
记
住关水
龙头，循环使用水；
（
4)
充分使用纸张；
（
5)
不使用塑料袋。
参考词汇：
on foot, turn off, tap,
reuse, make full use of, plastic bag
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/p>
要求：①词数：
80
个单词左右。①不得
真实的实的考生姓名，学校等信息。
②文章内
容可涉及到所给提示，并可适当发挥，但请不要逐条翻译。
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第一人称
时态：一般现在时
内容：
5
个要点，适当发挥
（二）头脑风暴
pollution, fortunately, save, on foot,
walk, water ,electricity,
drive the car,
taps,
reused,
recycle, reduce, duty, both
sides of the paper. plastic bags,
Lower carbon,
cut down trees,
improve, harmful, meaningful,
（三）单句翻译
< br>/
造句成文
1
、保护环境是我们的责任。
___________________________
______________
2
、现在的环境越来越来糟糕。
________________________________________
3
、我们应该做点什么保护环境。
___________________________
_________________
4
我们应该每天步行上班
_________________________
___________________________
5
、
我们应该节约水和电
_______________
___________________________________
6
、
我们应该循环使用水
___________________________
__________________________
7
、
我们应该两面使用纸。
_________________________________________
______
8
、记住上商店使用自己的袋子。
_____________________________________________
__
9
我们的生活会变得越来越好
____
__________________________________________
10
、让我们开始行动吧！
____________
________________________________________
11.
我们应告诉父母走着上班，而不是开车上班。
12
．购物用篮子而不用塑料袋是值
得提倡的。
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2012
写作话题专练（七）
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．我过去常常开车上班，但是现在我发现坐公交车也很方便。<
/p>
14
．如果
我们做了这件事，你可以想象我们的生活将多么美好。
（四）连句成篇
and, also, as well, so, because, for,
but, however, while, although, though, therefore,
in order
to,
so
that,
by,
firstly,
secondly,
as
for,
first
of
all,
then,
next,
besides,
what’s
more,
not
only…but also, after all,
finally, the last but not the least,
like, such as, for example/instance,
and so on, on one hand, on the other
hand, for one thing, for another thing, in my
opinion, in
all, in a word, at present,
in the past, instead of, to begin with,
It’s our duty to protect the
environment. The environment is becoming worse and
worse.
_________,
we
must
do
something
to
prevent
people
from
polluting
the
environment.
-
_______we should go to
school on foot and tell our parents to walk to
work. _________ we
should recycle water
and save electricity
_______
turning
off the taps ,fans, TV sets and
lights
_____
we
don’t
need
them.
____
___
we
should
use
the
both
sides
of
the
paper.
________
remember
to
go
shopping
with
your
own
basket.
I
believe______
our
life
will
become
better and better. Lower carbon,
happier life. Let’s take
actions.
（五）提升亮点
1.
词组
turn off,
remember to do,
make use of, ,it’s our duty to do,
prevent…. from,
protect the
environment,
beautify
the
environment,
reduce
pollution,
do
harm
to
，
cut
down
trees,
live
a
low
carbon
life,
waste
resource,
take
effective
measures
to
do,
form the good habit of
doing…,
raise people’s
environmental awareness,
take actions
2.
句型从句
without,
so
that,
had
better
do,
It’s
bad
for,
make
+adj,
it’s
time
to,
not
only
…but
also,
the
more
,the
more,
be
glad
that,
the
reason
why
…is
that,
generally speaking,
though/although,
I think that…/I believe
that…
3.
非谓语结构：
It’s +adj. for sb. to
do, doing
sth is…
e.g.
It is good
to make full use of paper.
We should go
to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to
work instead of driving the car.
By
doing this, we can save many tree.
Remember to go shopping with basket
rather than plastic bags.
I used to drive to work,
but now it is convenient to take the bus
（六）主题升华
I believe our life will become better
and better if we can do these things.
It’s time for us to raise people’s
environmental awareness and
take
actions
Pollution is one of the most
serious environmental problems in the world.
The more exercise you do, the less junk
food you eat, the healthier you will become.
（七）实践练笔
< br>6
月
5
日
( June 5)
是世界环境保护日，
我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严
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