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年山东高考英语读后续写得分技巧
一、得分要点
每段首尾的字迹必须非常清楚。
其实阅卷老师无论看什么作文，
他的重点一般都
是放在每段的首尾，首尾必须吸睛。
有些乱七八糟八竿子打不着的就不要乱说，
读后续写一般都划出了提
示词，
这些
提示词其实都是续写的线索，必须串联使文章紧凑。
但最重要的就是主题升华，
弘扬人性的真善美。
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、
形容词、
副
词之外，
最重要的是高级动
词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到
的人的动作是非常多的，比如
cry
，这就过
< br>于简单，要侧重细节描写，
to show, not to
tell,
高分作文一般就会写：
With
shoulders shivering, her tears cannot
help streaming down her face.
她的双肩哆
哆嗦嗦，
眼泪情不自禁地从她脸上流下来
。
所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，
都要
事先做好
准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级
词汇都要是最好的
，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都
可以描写。
虽说读后续写没有字数限制，
但是考虑到字的大小与
整体篇幅限制，
一般两个波
折即可，
如
事态变坏一个转折，
最后事态好转一个转折即可。
侧重人物矛盾
与心
理冲突，比如两人之间的猜忌，后重归于好，类似小学生作文。
二、
写作技巧
1.
从原文中整理出
3
～
5
个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节。情节不能自
己读后凭空想象，按自
己看过的小说、电视剧情节适当推理。
2.
根据两个段首语来推理情节。段首语往往决定着这一整段话的走向，不可衔
接不
当。
3.
根据关键词来推理情节发
展。原文中关键词一般会在十个左右，也并不是都
能用上的。
有
一部分关键词对于预测下面的情节是很有导向意义的，
因而会在后
文中用的到。
关键词中，有关于情感的连接的有关于时间的
指向的，有关键句线索反复出
现的，
要做的，
< br>是串联前面的伏笔后面是否有所体现，
前文的人物关系是否把握，
以及把握后是否在续写中使矛盾凸现既而解决，这些都是决定了分数高低的因
素。
一般答案是可以体现这些伏笔与连接的，如果严
重偏题，首先要考虑是否读
懂文章，其次，杜绝天马行空的续写，需要回归文本，不需要
与标准答案一致，
但要体现前文的伏笔，
线索，
转折关系，
这方面考察的是理解能力与阅读预判能
力，
需多练习以提升，加分项是主题升华，鸡汤加持无需多言。
4.
根据故事需要，合理地、有条理地增加一些次要的情节。
比如人物的表情、
动作、心理活动，细节描写等。
5.
根据生活常识或者社会经验，丰富文章的细节。不可闹出
不合常理的笑话。
成为改卷老师紧张改卷期间的谈资。
6.
平时多练习续写微作文，找到自己所能掌控的语句长度。
7
句
*20
词
=140
词，
8
句
*20
词
=160
词，
10
句
*15
词
=150
词。其实续写并不是很可怕，一篇读后
续
写
10
～
1
5
句，就可以达到字数。然后分开两段，每段也就
5
～
8
句话。
7.
多种句型反复练习、尝试，找到自己能够驾驭的句子类型
。这样的好句可以
加分不少。简单句、并列句、复合句。当然建议复合句也只是基础的复
合句，无
需过于复杂，有时候牵强用上反而碍事。
8.
平时注意多积累记叙文、故事方面的词汇、句型和句段、
丰富自己的记叙文
类英语语言的材料库。考试中用出地道的英语句子，老师一定会很欣赏
。
脑中先成文，落笔就一气呵成。相对简单部分，直接书写在
答卷上；重点部
分可以先在草稿纸上写一下，斟酌一下词句的使用，然后誊抄上去。
三、积极积累写作素材
脚部动作：
1. Then
Lisa stood up and made her way through the crowd
toward me.
2. Lisa planted her feet
firmly in front of me.
3. She managed
to climb onto it and waited patiently.
4. Reuben ran/rushed down Water Street,
trembling with great panic.
5. The
shadows were lengthening when Reuben arrived
at
（动作）
the
factory.
6. Then, clutching the tin
can, he headed for the shop.
7. Racing
home, Reuben burst through the front door.
8. Disappointed and frustrated, the
poor man made his way back to his family.
9. Suddenly, the woman stood up and
entered the house in tears.
10. And
yet, they all just stood there staring at me,
motionless.
11. Belle Ringer nodded
thoughtfully, and Fannie hurried off to wait on
the rest of her
tables.
12.
I led them toward a large corner booth. I could
feel the rest of the staff following
behind as we marched through the dining
room.
13. I dragged myself through
daily chores, feeling exhausted.
14.
The elderly man fled away with great panic.
15. The man stepped back/stepped onto
the platform to take a good look at the
paintings.
16. He leapt to
his feet and rushed out of the living room.
17. He sprung from his chair and rushed
to pick up the telephone.
18. He jumped
up and rushed out of the living room.
19. She just sat there staring into
space
20. The kids sat around a
campfire
21. Please remain seated until
your name is called.
22. He seated
himself comfortably at the foot of the bed.
23. He took his usual seat at the front
of the classroom.
24. That man is hurt,
he's limping.
25. He was so drunk that
he staggered all the way home.
26. She
stumbled upstairs and into bed.
27. She
tiptoed to the bed so as not to wake the baby.
28. They strolled around the park.
29. They enjoy wandering through the
countryside.
30. He paced up and down
the platform, waiting for the train.
31. Demonstrators marched through the
streets of the city.
32. A baby crawls
before he can walk.
33. Paul decided to
edge away from the crowd.
34. The cat
crept silently towards the bird.
35.
The boy sneaked in without paying.
36.
I must dash or I'll miss the train.
37.
She goes jogging every day.
38. He
tripped over the step and fell.
39. The
group hiked up to the top of the hill.
40. As I was sitting in the park, I
watched as couples seemed to meander around
happily.
手上动作：
1. Stunned, I stood up and gave her an
awkward hug / hugged her in an awkward way.
2. Speechless, she smiled radiantly and
gathered her son into her arms.
3. The
nearer it got, the more she waved the yellow
blouse wildly.
4. The man took the
sacks, reached into his pocket and placed four
coins in Ruben's
hand.
5.
Then, clutching the tin can, he headed for the
shop.
6. He parked down the street from
Bobby's house, and rushed to his front door,
trembling with excitement.
7.
The man gently wrapped the gift in brown paper and
placed the parcel in Ruben's
hands.
8. Dora lifted the lid, tears beginning
to blur her vision.
9. Seeing no other
people notice us, I placed the Christmas present
down and pounded
his doorbell.
10. She didn't say a word, but smiled a
watery smile and held my hand tightly.
11. As we shook hands with the new
owners, I told them how fortunate they were.
12. He patted my head, and inquired:
“Is there anything particular you
want?”
13. He was squeezing
my wrist so hard that it ached.
14. She
stroked her fingers through my hair, and said: “Of
course there is a Santa
Clause.”
15. She
handed the napkin to me, and three $$20 bills fell
onto my desk when I opened
it.
16. Stevie looked at me, and then at
his mother, then pulled out one of the napkins.
17. The class clapped warmly as Mr. Lee
presented me with the reward.
18. He
reached into his pocket and withdrew a note.
19. Mrs. Damon pointed to the quotation
from Albert Einstein hanging on the wall.
20. Calmly he picked up the brush and
started again to whitewash.
21. She
nervously fingered her collar.
22. He
stroked the cat and patted the dog
23.
She tapped him on the shoulder.
24. He
grasped my hand and we ran
25. She
grabbed her briefcase and ran to the bus stop
26. The thief snatched the handbag and
disappeared into the crowd.
27. Press
the button.
28. Please handle the goods
with great care
。
29. George stood silently with his arms
folded.
情感描写：
1.
喜乐
①
The smile on her face
shone like a
diamond.
她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②
A smile of understanding
flashed across his
face.
他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③
A ripple of
excitement ran through
them.
一阵激动声穿过他们。
④
Laughter
lingered around the
room.
笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤
His eyes twinkled with
pleasure.
他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥
A wild
gaiety
（快乐）
took
hold of her.
一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦
Unforgettable were her
eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a
steady
smile.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样
闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧
I was wild
with joy.
我欣喜若狂。