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Title
:
Does family
facilitate personal development?
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statement:
(存在问题较多,抓紧时间修改)
Zhuang Qun
(the first
debater of the
affirmative
side
):
Good
afternoon
,
ladies
and
gentleman.
Dear
chairman,
friends
of
other debaters, my
teachers and friends. I
’ ’
m
very glad to be here.
Our opinion is
that family facilitates personal development. As
we all
known
,
good family education is beneficial to
personal development and
bad family
education is harmful to
children
’
growing-up.
The
environment
of
family
education
is
the
dominant
factor
to
the
development of adolescent. The most
important education for children is
family
education.
Growing in
the same
environment
,
which
is
full of
violence
and
hurt,
most
of
the
children
can
grow
up
happily.
However,
others
can
not.
The
main
reason
is
that
they
are
different
in
family
environment. It has
been found that the outstanding students in the
school
have
nearly
the
same
family
education
such
as
to
honor
their
parents,
respect
for
elders
and
so
on.
The
problem
children
probably
have
not
enough
family
education.
They
may
grow
up
in
families
that
are
single-parents or having
family violence.
Good
family
environment
can
not
only
give
children
the
food
and
nutrition
but
also
can
offer
children
the
beneficial
information
in
other
areas.
It
has
been
proved
that
teens
have
strong
ability
to
imitate.
Children
imitate
their
parents
when
they
are
young.
And
they
are
vigorously
to
imitate
if
in
their
eye
their
parents
are
strong
and
authoritative. So parents should make
good modelfor their children.
Family
’
culture
environment
have
great
influence
on
personal
development.
Good
culture
environment
can
broaden
our
horizons
and
increase
our
knowledge.
If
parents
both
have
profound
knowledge,
children
are
more
likely
to
accept
good
education
and
have
highly
educated. If parent have good virtue,
they will teach their children to be
honest people.
To comprehend the importance of
positive personal development,
we
are shown how it all can relate to
successful family development .We can
see
from
successful
people
such
as
“
The
There
Sun
”
in
northern
Song
dynasty .The father is Sun Xun, the two
brothers are Sun Shi and Sun Zhe.
They
are all famous scholar and writers. It is the
powerful speaker to say
the important
of family to personal development.
All
in all, family facilitates personal development. I
hope that family
will
provide
a
much
healthier
and
more
effective
environment
to
parenting children.
(
中间部分的论点不够清晰,建议重新构思布局)
Zhao Hanxi
(the
first debater of the
negative
side
):
Personally I think,
Personal achievement is bound up with his effort
and
persistence
rather
than
family
background.
I
think
that
the
family
background plays only a small part on
personal achievement. On the one
hand,
someone
is
born
into
a
life
of
privilege
and
wealth,
the
family
provide
the
abundant
materials
and
resources
for
him.
However,
he
does
n’
t make full
use of them, and he
accomplishes
nothing finally. On
the other hand,
someone lives a poor life, but he makes great
efforts, and
he
will
reach
his
purpose
finally.
I
’
d
like
to
say
this:
The
life
starting
point
is
beyond
control
of
my
choice,
but
the
life
destination
will
be
decided by me! There is a
saying
“As you sow,
so will you reap”.
How
great you make efforts would make a
great difference on what you will
get
in the future.
Take Yu
Minhong for example
,
a man of
miracles. He was born in a
poor rural
family in eastern China's Jiangsu Province.
Although most of
his childhood was
spent helping his father in the field, his mother
always
encouraged him to go to school.
He
took the college entrance exam for
three
times,
and
finally
he
got
access
to
Peking
University.
After
he
graduated from the Peking
University, Yu Minhong became a member of
the teaching staff for his Alma Mater
for 7 years. He then started his own
career
by
founding
The
New
Oriental
School
to
help
students
develop
their English
skills. At first, the so-called school was merely
an English
training
class
with
no
more
than
30
students.
However,
Yu's
English
training class quickly became well
known throughout Beijing due to his
practical and humorous teaching style.
Encouraged by the initial success,
Yu
decided to open an English school of his own. Now
he is the founder
and CEO of New
Oriental Education and Technology Group, he's
labeled
as the
From
the
above
example,
we
can
see
that
Yu
minhong
’
s
family
doesn
’
t provide
many materials and resources for him. The success
he has
obtained
today
is
closely
associated
with
his
effort
and
persistence.
Giving up is
not Yu
’
s option forever. If
Yu
’
s family is very rich,
without
his effort and hard work, he
can
’
t reach his goals.
Thomas Addison said
“
A
strong man will struggle with the storms of
fate
”
. So only if you make
great efforts, can you make great
success.
Above all, in my
opinion, Personal achievement is closely
associated
with his effort and
persistence rather than family background.
< br>(正反方一
辩都存在同样的问题,
开篇名义,
一辩的任务主要是陈述本方主要观
点,从哪几个方面进行论述,而不是以实
例展开剖析。实例分析可以
放到二三辩中。
)
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Free debate:
The second
debater of the affirmative side:
Liu
Peng
( referred to as L).
The second debater of the negative
side:
An Xin
(referred to as
A).
L: Men are naturally
good at their
birth and his good
personality is
shaped by the
environment he grows in. As far as we are
concerned,
our
families
offer
the
main
development
environment
at
the
early
time
of
our
life
which
will
influence
our
personality
deeply.
Good
personality shaped in
family will contribute to our development.
A:
But
we
also
fall
into
some
bad
habits
because
of
our
families.
These bad habits
will do harm to our development.
L:
Despite of that, considering the good personality,
no one can deny
that family has done
something good to our
development. And
we
usually get educated and skilled
with support from the family. That
means family not only plays an
important role in shaping our good
personality, but also offers help to
our education and development.
A:
However,
many
people
get
no
education
because
their
families
are too poor to support them. And we
always say those people gain
the
success by themselves. Maksim Gorky is a perfect
example.
L: Gorky should also thank his
family for his family fed him when
he
can
’
t
support
himself
and
offered
him
his
first
job.
Besides,
people
usually
start
their
enterprise
with
support
from
the
family
more
or
less.
Family
members
are
those
who
expect
your
success
mostly.
That
is
to
say
they
will
usually
provide
their
help
to
your
development.
A: Then how about people who has no
family or those who can get