jou英语专八改错

rable--tolerable

青年人和中年人的区别在于能使青年人不快乐的事情中年人都 可以忍受。

这也是中年的好处

所在，所以此句中的

intolerable

应该改为

tolerabl e

。

二

Whether

the

eyes

are

windows

of

the

soul

is

debatable;they

are

intensely

important

in

interpersonal communication is a __1

fact. During the first two months of a baby's life, the stimuli that __2

produces a smile is a pair of eyes. The eyes need not to be real: a __3

mask with two dots will produce a smile. Significantly, a real human face with eyes covered will

not motivate a smile, or will the sight of __4

only one eye when the face is presented on profile. This attraction to __5

eyes opposed to the nose or mouth continues as the baby matures. __6

In one study, when American four-year-old were asked to draw __7

people, 75 percent of them drew people with mouths, and 99 percent __8

of them drew people with eyes. In Japan, furthermore, where babies __9

are carried on their mother's back, infants do not acquire as much attachment to eyes like they do

in other cultures. As a result, __10

Japanese adults make little use of the face either to encode or decode meaning.

1.^they-that

分句后 的分句应有它独立的主谓结构，

正像它前面的结构一样。

而后半 句的谓语是

is

，

表语

是

fact

，

主语似乎是缺失 的，

因此在

they

前面加上

that

就构成了主语从句作为这半句的主语。

i-stimulus

stimuli

看似单数实则是

stimulu s

的复数形式，因此应改为

stimulus

< br>。

-/

这里的

n eed

作情态动词，因此删去

to

。< /p>

-nor

并列的否定，用否定形式

nor

表示倒 装。

-in

in profile

表示

“侧面，从侧面”

。如：

The painting shows her in profile

。

6.^opposed-as

op posed

前应使用连词

as

引导比较 分句。

-olds

由谓语的复数形式可以看出这里需要用复数形式

four- year-olds

。

-but

rmore-however

< /p>

上一句话指明美国文化中眼睛的重要性，

而这一句话似乎指出日本 文化中眼睛并不具有同样

的重要性，因此两句话的关系是转折而不是递进。

-as

as

??

a s

比较结构。

三

Elizabeth Blackwell was born in England in 1821, and emigrated from London to New York City

when she

was ten year's old. One day, she decided that she wanted __1

to be a doctor. That was nearly impossible for a woman

in the middle of the nineteenth century.

Before writing __2

many letters seeking an admission to medical school, she __3

was finally accepted by a doctor in Philadelphia. Therefore __4

determined she was that she taught in school and gave __5

music lessons to earn money for her tuition.

In 1849,until graduating from medical school, she decided __6

to farther her education in Paris. She wanted to be a surgeon, __7

but a serious eye infection forced her to abandon the returning to the US, she found

difficult to start her __8

own practice because she was a woman. By 1857 Elizabeth and her sister, also a doctor, managed

to open a new hospital,the first for woman and children. Besides being the first __9

female physician and found her own hospital, she also __10

established the first medical school for women.

1. year's

—

years

2. Before

—

After

此处是讲述

Elizabeth Blackwell

写了许多信之后，最终被费城的一个医生所接受。

3.

删掉

an.

admission

是不可数名词。

4. Therefore

—

So

此处隐藏着一个

so...that...

结 构

5.

删掉

in

teach school

为固定搭配，教书

6. until

—

after

据时间顺序，她是

1849

年从医学院毕业后决定去巴黎深造。

7. farther

—

further

farther

只能做副词，

furt her

既可以做副词也可以做动词，此处就是

further< /p>

做动词，并带有

宾语

her education

。

8.

在

difficult

前加

it

it

做形式宾语，替代不定式

to start her own practice

。

9. woman

—

women

如果用一个人或东西说明整个类属的特点，

有三种表示方式：

在名词

前加定冠词；用名词 的复数形式。此处就是使用名词的复数形式表示类属，

women

and

children

。

10. found

—

founding

< /p>

与

being

一样作介词

besides

的宾语。

四

Something

has

been

happening

to

the

concept

of

either

in

critical

discourse

and

elsewhere. For a long time, __1

this concept operated under common understood restrictions. __2

It was used to refer to a certain genre of literature; a certain __3

aspect of literature in general

——

the element of plot, action,or fable, including such constituents

like character, setting, __4

scene, and so on; and to any narrative or story contained __5

a large element of invention. But recently, the concept of

Though still used to __6

refer to the action or plot of literary work, it has come to __7

be appllied to something more: to the ideas, themes, and

beliefs that are being embodied in the

action or plot. It is __8

not

only

the

events

in

literature

that

are

regarded

as

fictive

but

the

or

view

conveyed in the presentation of the events as well. And this is not the end of the matter.

Gone a step further, critics now sometimes suggest, by a kind __9

of tautology, that literary meanings are fictions although all __10

meanings are fictions, this critical view asserts that

1. either

—

both

both...and...

为固定搭配。

2. common

—

commonly

过去分词

understood

作定语 ，需要副词修饰

3.

在第二个

a certain

前加

to

，与前面的

to

短语并列，都为

refer to

所加的短语

4. like

—

as

或

删掉

such

such...as

为固定搭配。如删掉

such