relaxing是什么意思2020中考英语作文：兴趣爱好

2021年1月27日发(作者：naj)
2020
中考英语作文：兴趣爱好

08
兴趣爱好篇

（一）

假如你是贝贝，你远在澳大利亚的笔友
Andrew
给你写
了一封邮件，告诉了你关于他们读书周的事情，并想了解你的一些情况跟看
法．请你根据他的提 问，回复一封英文邮件．
From
：

Andrew@Australia
．
com To
：

Beibei@Suzhou
．
com We will have a Reading Week next month
．
Every
student should read a book and share it with others
．
I
＇
m not sure
which book to read
．
I remember you like reading very much
．
Here are
some questions I want to ask you
．
Can you tell me the reasons why
reading is important
？
How much time do you spend reading every day
？

What kind of book do you like best
？
Where do you get your books
？

Can you tell me something about the book you
＇
ve read recently and
what you have learned from the book
？
I hope to hear from you
soon
．
Yours
．
Andrew
注意：
1
．词数
90
左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计
入总词数；


2
．回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥．使全文连贯、通顺．
Dear Andrew
，

I
＇
m glad you will have a Reading
Week
．
______________________ ________________________________________
______ __________________________________________________ _____________
_________________________________ ____________________________________
__________ __________________________________________________ _________
_____________________________________ ________________________________
______________ __________________________________________________ _____
______________________
______________ __________________________________________________ _____
________________ I hope you will find my answers useful to
you
．
Write to me any time if you have other questions
．
Best wishes.
Beibei
【满分范文】
Dear Andrew
，
I
′
m glad you will have a Reading
Week
．

（引出话题）
I think reading is really important because it
＇
s
really useful
．【高分句型一】（我的观点）
It can not only improve our
knowledge but also make us relaxed
．（作用）
I usually read for an
hour every day
．
I like reading novels best
．高分句型二
And I often
borrow books from the school library
．

（我的做法）
I have just
finished a book about Robinson
．
It is a novel about how Robinson
successfully survived after spending many years on a little island
and finally went back to his family
．
From him
，
I learned that
whatever we met
，
we should never give up
．（我朗读的书籍及给我的启
示）
I hope you will find my answers useful to you
．
Write to me any
time if you have other questions
．（希望）

（二）

为深入贯彻习近平总书记关于弘扬中华优秀传统文化的讲话精神，落实立德树人的根本任务，
2019
年
7
月
15
日定西市教育局与定西市语委办联合举办了首届定西中小学生诗词大

会。大会的成功举办，在定西市再次掀起了“全民读书”的热潮。请以“
Grow
up with reading
”为题，根据以下思维导图的提示，写一篇英语短文，向《中
学生导报》投稿，谈谈你对阅读的看法，并建议大家多读书，读好书。

要求
: 1.
要点齐全，适当发挥；


2.
句子及篇章准确、连贯，书写规范；


3.
词数
:80-100
词左右；


4.
文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。

参考词汇
:
身心
body and mind
【满分范文】
Grow up with reading.
Reading plays an important part in our life. First
，
reading can open
up our eyes. The more we read, the more we know about the outside
world. Second, reading can make us cleverer and happier. We can live
a healthy and happy life by learning something useful and meaningful
from the book. Everyone can become cleverer by reading. However, some
students spend most of their time on Internet games instead of
reading. As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork.
This is harmful to them. I would like to suggest that all of us
should do more reading. Let
＇
s grow up with reading!
【解析】
1.
题干
解读：该题目要求包含图 片里的内容，写出阅读的重要作用，建议大家多读
书，读好书等。可以分点写，有条理性。

2.
例文点评：例文通过对图片里的内容，写出了阅读的重要作用，建议了大家
多读书 ，读好书等一一讲述。语句通顺，条理清晰，词组，短语，句型等运用
灵活。

3.
高分亮点：词组：
plays an important part
；

open up
；

a healthy and happy life
；

become cleverer
；

instead of
；

As a result
；

fall behind
等；


句型：
Reading plays an important part in our life./The more we read,
the more we know about the outside world. /We can live a healthy and
happy life by learning something useful and meaningful from the
book./As a result, they fall behind others in their schoolwork.
【点
睛】

书面表达：

首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；

然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如
plays an important part
；


2

open up
；

a healthy and happy life
；

become cleverer
；

instead of
；

As a result
；

fall behind
等；

然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段 之间的过
渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过
渡平稳， 自然流畅，如
however
；

最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点 符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是
否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求 等。

（三）

假定你是李华，收到英国笔友
Harry
的邮件，获悉他在机器人制作比
赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复。词数
80
左右。

From: Harry@ To: Lihua 2019@ Dear Li Hua, I
’
m glad
to tell you that I
’
ve just won the first place in a robot- making
competition. I love robots! They bring me great fun. What do you
think of robots? Do you want to have your own robot? Why? Looking
forward to hearing from you. Yours, Harry
参考词汇：
congratulation
祝
贺注意事项：

1.
回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总词数；


2.
意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；


3.
请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。

Dear Harry,
_ __________________________________________________ __________________
____________________________ _________________________________________
_____ __________________________________________________ ______________
________________________________ _____________________________________
_________ __________________________________________________ __________
____________________________________ _________________________________
_____________ __________________________________________________ ______
________________________________________ _____________________________
_________________ ________________________________ Yours, Li Hua
【写
作思路】

此类观点表达和原因说明类的作文，在我们三轮的中考复习中进行过
系统的训练。

学生可根据日常所授的写作模板，对全文内容及结构进行合理安排。

（
1
）结构：开头表示祝贺，使用所给提示词；


（2
）正文要点：表达兴趣并说明原因，至少两点（如热点科技，对科技创新的

3

兴趣，对生活的改变，对医疗、救援

的帮助等）；


写作时从单词拼写到句子结构，从时态到语态，都应该注意统一。在打草稿时
把需要用到的关键 词、高级句式、关键结构甚至注意事项等简单地写在题目旁
边，以尽量规避错误。

【参考范文】
Dear Harry, Congratulations
！
How glad I am to share your
good news! I think robots are helpful in many ways. And in the future,
they will play more important roles in our daily life. Plus, I am
dying to have a robot of my own. I can have it take care of my
grandparents when we are not at home. You see, my grandparents are
old and cannot move easily. It can help them do some housework such
as cooking, cleaning the house and so on. Hoping you will make
greater progress. Yours, Li Hua
（四）

文娱、体育、户外等丰 富多彩的课
外活动为我们的生活增添了生机和活力。请以“
After-class Activities Make
My Life Colorful
”为题，为校园专栏写一篇英文稿件。

内容包括：

1.
简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动；


2.
该课 外活动给你带来的收获及感受
(
交朋友
;
放松自我
)
。
写作要求：

1.
词数
80
词左右；

开头已写好，不计入总词数；


2.
文章不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays after- class
activities are becoming more and more important
________________________
_______ __________________________________________________ ____________
__________________________________ ___________________________________
___________ __________________________________________________ ________
______________________________________ _______________________________
_______________ __________________________________________________ ____
__________________________________________ ___________________________
___________________ __________________________________________________
______________________________________________ _______________________
______________________ ___________________________
【写作思路】

这是一
篇话题作文，让我们写一篇关于
After-class Activities Make My Life
Colorful
的英文稿件，并鼓励同 学们积极参加课外活动，这需要我们发挥英语
思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来。写作需要 用第一人称，注意
各种时态的交替运用。内容要点包括：简要描述你参加过的一项课外活动，时
态用一般过去时；


4

你参加过的课外活动给你带来的收获和 感受，时态以一般现在时为主和一般将
来时为主；

最后总结自己的心得体会。

【参考范文】
After-class Activities Make My Life Colorful Nowadays,
after-school activities are becoming more and more important. There
are many different kinds of activities, for example, arts and sports.
I joined a volleyball club last year. I am used to playing volleyball
after school. In the volleyball club, I
＇
ve made lots of friends. We
often play volleyball after school. Whether it is hot or cold, we
never stop playing it. I feel happy while playing volleyball. And it
is also a good way to relax myself. I think I will continue to play
volleyball after school in the future. All in all, after-school
activities make my life more colorful and meaningful.
【名师点评】

高
分句型一：
I am used to playing volleyball after school.
我习惯放学后
打排球。
be used to doing sth.
习惯于做某事。

高分句型二：
And it is also a good way to relax myself.
这也是放松自己
的好方法。动词不定式
to relax myself
用作后置定语。

高分句型三：
All in all, after-school activities make my life more
colorful and meaningful.
总之，课外活动使我的生活更加丰富多彩，更有意
义。

more colorful and meaningful
用作
my life
的宾语补足语。

（五）

如你是李华，想参加
China Daily
举办的以”梦想职业体验”为主题的
2019
年夏令营活动。请给主办人
Mr. Smith
写一封介绍个 人情况的申请邮
件。内容包括：
1.
个人信息与兴趣爱好
2.
梦想职 业与个人计划

写作要求；

1.
词数
90
词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

2.
文中不得出现真实的学校名称与姓名。

Dear Mr. Smith, It
＇
s my pleasure to introduce myself to you.
_______________________________ ______________________________________
________ _________
____________________________________ _________________________________
_____________ __________________________________________________ ______
________________________________________ _____________________________
_________________ __________________________________________________ __
____________________________________________ _________________________
_____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________
_________________________ ________ I do hope to join in the activity
and look forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours Sincerely, Li Hua

5

【写作思路】
< br>本文属于申请信，给主办人史密斯先生写一封介绍个人情况的申
请邮件，包含个人信息与兴趣爱好 和梦想职业与个人计划。根据要表达的内容
确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增 加内容。

【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Smith, It
＇
s my pleasure to introduce myself to
you
．
My name is Li Hua
．
I like reading and writing
．
I spend lots of
time reading in the library with my classmates after school
．
And I
have a habit of keeping a dairy
．
I want to be a writer when I grow
up
．
So After knowing your summer camp
，
I feel very excited because
it
＇
s about dream job experience
．
If I have this kind of opportunity
to experience my dream job
，
I will cherish this chance
．
After work
，
I
will spend more time making a summary
．
I do hope to join in the
activity and look forward to your reply
．
Yours Sincerely, Li Hua
【名师点评】

这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达
符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如
like
doing, spend+
时间
+doing sth, keep a diary, grow up
以及
If I have this
kind of opportunity to experience my dream job
，
I will cherish this
chance
中
if
引导的条件句用 一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，增强逻辑关
系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯 。

（六）

假设你叫李华，你校英语报正在以“我最喜欢的一天”为题， 向中学生
开展征文活动。请你根据如下内容提示，用英语写一篇短文，向该报社投稿。

1.
你最喜欢的是星期五；


2.
原因：

(1)
这天有你最喜欢上的音乐课
(
从小就喜欢音乐，音乐老师和音乐课很有 趣
)
；


(2)
……

要求：

(1)
所写内容必须包括以上要点和自行补充要点；


(2)
文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；


(3)
内容连贯并进行合理拓展；


(4)100
词左右；

题目已经写好，不计入总词数。

My Favorite Day
__________________________ ___________________________________________
___ __________________________________________________ ________________
______________________________ _______________________________________
_______ __________________________________________________ ____________
__________________________________ ___________________________________
___________ __________________________________________________ ________

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