vep高中英语作文读后续写专题指导(心理描写)

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读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。

高中英语作文读后续写专题指导（心理描写）

应试指导：

1.
阅读是续写的基础和前提

——
What to read
读人物
(Who)
读事件
(What,Why,How)
读背景
(When,Where)
读语言
(Style)
2.
构思是续写的核心和关键

——
What to consider
想文章主题

想人物交集

想故事逻辑

3.
行文是续写的落实和产出

——
What
to
write
写
人物

写故事

写思想


步骤：

1.

精读文章，把握
续写线索

搞清楚何时何地谁发生了何事，事件是如何发展的，为什么会这样发展等问题

2.

仔细审题，明了续写要求

2.1

关键词

关键词分类：
人物类关键词能引领故事的发展，

动作类关键词能陈述动作的行为，
时
间地点类关键词能描述故事场景，事件类关键词能牵引故事 情节，

形容词类关键词能描
述
事件特征或人物情感。

关键词对续写内容有一定的导向和限制作用，有助于构思故事的结尾
.

2.2

续写部分段落首
句

仔细研究从第一段提示语我们 得知什么，应该考虑接下去写什么，第一段结尾如何呼
应第二段开头的提示语，第二段续写时可考虑写什 么，第二段结尾如何使故事发展得合情
合理。

3.

再读原文，构思
续写内容

因为续写是对原文的延伸，

所 以我们续写时要遵循原文的思路和语言风格。为
此，考
生有必要细读原文，关注原文的主要情节 、矛盾的冲突点或高潮处，还要关注原文
的语言

风格，如细节描写或人物对话等。

4.

拟写草稿，

丰富语言表达

结合提示语和文中划线的关键词拟写出草稿，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，

以及上下文的衔接等。
根据故事需要，续写部分需要合理地增加一些次要的情节，比

1

读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。

如人物的表情、动作、心理活动、细节描写等。

读后续写微技能指导
I
人物内心世界

Part 1
心理及情感描写

I

表达情感的单词：

calm

concern

frighten


grateful


shock


upset


confuse


regret


depressed


content
astonish
curious


frown


anger


yawn


delight


thrill


uncertain


exhausted delighted


guilty


dilemma bored loneliness ...
II

表达情感变化的词块
:
let sb. down
to
one’s
regret be
ashamed of
shed tears of joy
what a
pity(shame) be in
a good mood
laugh
one’s
head
off
be clouded with grief
crying one’s heart out
with eyes full of
horror to one’s
disappointment have
ants in one’s pants

with one’s knees
trembling with a lump
in one’s throat

make one’s hair stand on
end glare at sb. with
burning eyes be wild with
joy(be overjoyed) make sb.
jump out of one’s
skin
have butterflies in one’s
stomach
be pleased beyond
description(words) burst into
tears (burst out crying)

2

读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。

请将上述短语填入表格适当的位置：

喜悦

恐惧

痛苦
/
悲
伤

失望

愤怒
/
焦
虑紧张
/
后悔

遗憾


练

习

1
：

选词填空：

light up
scare
freeze
tongue-tie
stream down
ashamed
shed tears of joy, be in a good mood, laugh one’s
head off, be wild with
joy(be overjoyed), be pleased beyond description(words)...
with eyes full of horror, with one’s knees trembling, make one’s hair stand
on end, make sb. jump out of one’s skin ...

let sb. down, to one’s regret, crying one’s heart out , with a lump in one’s
throat, be clouded with grief, to one’s disappointment, burst into
tears(burst out crying)...
be ashamed of, what a pity(shame), have ants in one’s pants, glare at sb.
with burning eyes, have
butterflies in one’s stomach...

1)

His face lit up with pleasure.
2)

The man next to him was scared to death with death with eyes full of horror.
3)

The boy froze with terror, too scared to move an inch.
4)

The lady’s face turn pale and she stood there
tongue-tied.
5)

Her heart ached, tears streaming down her cheeks.
6)

She felt so ashamed that she could feel her face burning/ the blood rushing to her face.

Part 2

即时训练：

练习

2
用适当的形式填空：

1.

Hearing the news, he got very angry.
Hearing the news, he was filled with
anger.
2.

When she knew the result of the test, she felt extremely excited/ joyful/

3

读后续写重中之重：范文素材积累，读原著，欣赏摘抄。

thrilled. When she knew the result of the test, her eyes twinkled with
excitement/ joy.
3.

She broke up with her husband, and she felt extremely sad.
She broke up with her husband, and she was overcome with sadness/ sorrow/grief.
4.

Seeing the snake, the boy felt very fearful/ frightened/
scared. Seeing the snake, the boy was full of fear/
fright/ scare.

练习

3
翻译训练
:
1.

Nervous and worried (
既紧张又焦虑
), I called my mum and told her what had happened.
2.

Much to our shock (
让我们吃惊的是
), the water level on the road kept rising.
3.

A sense of joy and happiness (
一阵欣喜的感觉
) suddenly went through him.
5.

The moment she saw how she did for her science test, tears started welling up (
热泪盈
眶
) in
Tina’s
eyes and falling down her cheeks.
6.

Hearing the news, so desperate (
绝望的
) was she that she drowned sadness in wine
（借酒消
愁）
.
7.

You could imagine the wide smile spreading across
Tim’s
face. (
你可以想象蒂姆笑得多开
心。
)
8.

Marie was nearly paralyzed with fear (
吓瘫了
) as she stumbled down the road towards
them, waving her arms wildly.

练习

4
仿写练习：

1.

1.
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。

At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt very scared.
At the sight of the fierce wolf, I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt
weak. (
嗓子发紧，膝盖发软
)

4