2021年1月23日发(作者：dsmp)
1
、目标和结果不清晰。

It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English
editing
paying
particular
attention
to
English
grammar,
spelling,
and
sentence
structure
so
that
the
goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.

2
、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。

In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical methods used in the study.
Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments should be provided.

3
、对于研究设计的
rationale:
Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.

4
、夸张地陈述结论
/
夸大成果
/
不严谨：

The conclusions are overstated. For example, the study did not show
if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.

5
、对
hypothesis
的清晰界定：

A hypothesis needs to be presented
。


6
、对某个概念或工具使用的
rationale/
定义概念：

What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?

7
、对研究问题的定义：

Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear,
write one section to define the problem

8
、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写
literature review:
The topic is novel but the application proposed is not so novel.

9
、对
clai m,
如
A
＞
B
的证明，
verification:
There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible
to judge whether the algorithm is an improvement on previous work.

10
、严谨度问题：

MNQ is easier than the primitive PNQS, how to prove that.

11
、格式（重视程度）
：

In
addition,
the
list
of
references
is
not
in
our
style.
It
is
close
but
not
completely
correct.
I
have
attached a pdf file with
Before submitting a revision be sure that your material is properly prepared and formatted. If you are
unsure,
please
consult
the
formatting
nstructions
to
authors
that
are
given
under
the

and Forms

12
、语言问题（出现最多的问题）
：

有关语言的审稿人意见：

It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English
editing
paying
particular
attention
to
English
grammar,
spelling,
and
sentence
structure
so
that
the
goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.

The
authors
must
have
their
work
reviewed
by
a
proper
translation/reviewing
service
before
submission; only then can a proper review be performed. Most sentences contain grammatical and/or
spelling mistakes or are not complete sentences.

As
presented,
the
writing
is
not
acceptable
for
the
journal.
There
are
problems
with
sentence
structure, verb tense, and clause construction.

The English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. We strongly suggest that you
obtain assistance from a colleague who is well-versed in English or whose native language is English.

Please have someone competent in the English language and the subject matter of your paper go over
the paper and correct it ?

the quality of English needs improving.

作为审稿人，本不应该把编辑部的这些信息公开（冒风险啊）
，

但我觉得有些意见值得广大投稿人注意，

就贴出来吧，当然，有关审稿人的名字，< br>Email
，文章题名信息等就都删除了，

以免造成不必要的麻烦！






两个拒的是需要我们反思和学习的！

（括号斜体内容为我注解）


Reviewer 4

Reviewer Recommendation Term: Reject
Overall Reviewer Manuscript Rating: 25
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Title (Prof./Dr./Mr./Mrs.): Prof.
Name: XXX
Affiliation: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Manuscript
entitled

XXX
……………

it
has
been
synthesized
with
a
number
of
different
methods
and
in
a
variety
of
forms.
This
manuscript
does
not
bring
any
new
knowledge
or
data
on