起飞英语话题 10 如何用英语描写节假日活动

2021年1月20日发(作者：序列号英语)

话题

10

如何用英语描写节假日活动
Festivals
，
holidays and
celebrations




必走三步





假设你是李华，
对本班同学过生日的方式进行了全 面调查，
其结果如下表所示。
请根据
表格中提示的内容，写一篇

100
词左右的短文，说明同学们过生日的方式及想法。开头已
给出，但不计入总词数。

比例

40%
20%
30%
10%
方式

近郊旅游

种生日树

想法

放松心情，感受大自然

美化环境，有纪念意义

开一个生日派对

同学、朋友聚会、聊天，增进感情

获得特别的礼物

父母等送给自己特别想要的礼物，如手机等





Everyone likes to spend their birthday
，
but they have different ways to spend it
．
_______
_____________________ __________________________________________________ ________




第一步：认真审题，提炼要点





一审格式：本文是一篇介绍性说明文，题材是同学们感兴趣 的话题，即：生日的过法。
这种话题也是高考的一种命题角度，即中学生不仅要关注社会热点、校园趣事 、学业任务，
同时也要对自己身边经历过的生活小事有自己的评价。
此类话题适合中学生的思维 和心理特
点，易于培养学生的表达能力。





二审结构：
由于本文要求根据表格内容写作文，
所以，
最好的表述语句要用并列句和 复
合句，以此把数据与内容连贯地表达出来。具体步骤是：





(1)
提出调查的主题，以起到引入的效果。





(2)
对表格中的数据进行梳理，通顺地写出来。





(3)
自己对表格数据的感受以及对生日礼物的评价。





三审要点：用英语思维，理出写作要点。





have a birthday party










have a wonderful time




travel on their birthday








get close to the nature




receive the special presents





a mobile phone or a computer




plant a tree to celebrate their birthday make the hometown more beautiful




第二步：紧扣主题，扩点成句





Everyone has different ways to spend their holidays
．





We have four ways to spend our birthday
．





About half of us would like to have a birthday party with their friends and classmates
．





They can talk
，
sing and do anything at the party and often have a wonderful time
．





Some classmates like to travel on their birthday
．





They want to get close to nature and relax themselves
．





One third of my classmates hope to receive the special presents from their parents
．





One classmate in ten wishes to plant a tree to celebrate their birthday
．





第三步：补充修改，连句成篇





Everyone likes to spend their birthday
，
but they have different ways to spend it
．
In our class
，
we have four ways to spend their birthday
．





About half of us would like to have a birthday party on their birthday with their friends and
classmates
．
They
can
talk
，
sing
and
do
anything
at
the
party
and
often
have
a
wonderful