险胜高中英语作文人物描写写作学案

2021年1月20日发(作者：大公司)



（一）人物简介的写作步骤；
(
概
,
貌
,
育
,
平
,
估
)


1
）
概
.
age, sex, birth-place, background
2
）
貌
,.)
appearance ,character
3
）
育
,
education
4
）
平
,
big events in his or her life

( in order of time )
5
）
估
.
evaluation
(
二
)
语法，句法高分
tips
A.
概况

（尽量用同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺
)
如；

1)

Born in Poland on Nov. 7
，
1867, Madam Curie is a great scientist.
2)

Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12th,
1809.

3)

Born of a poor clerk
'
s family, Charles Dickens, a great novelist, had little schooling.
4)

Sun Showier, a world champion in diving, is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.
模拟练习
:

1.

雷锋是一位模范士兵。
Lei Feng was _
a model soldier.
.
2.

他于
1940
，
12
月
18
日出生于湖南省一个小山村的一个贫苦农民家庭。


On
December 1 8,1940, he
was born in
a poor
farmer
’
s

family in a little mountain village of
Hunan Province.
把

1
和
2
两句合成一个句子
:

LeFeng, a model soldier, was born of a poor peasant
’
s family
in a little mountain village of Hunan Province on December 18, 1940.
Born of a poor peasant
’
s family in a little mountain village of Hunam Province on December
18, 1940, Lei Feng was a model solder.
Ler Feng was a model soldier who was born of ------.
3..
李时珍是我国明代著名医学家（
medical scientist
）

Li Shizhen _
was a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty.

4.
他出生于
1518.







He
was born in
1518.
把
3
和
4
两句合成一个句子
:

Lishizhen, a famous medical scientist in the Ming Dynasty, was born in 1518.
5.
我的新同桌，名 叫张涛，是一个
16
岁的男生，来自四川。
（用一个句子来表达）

My new desk mate, Zhangtao, is a boy of 16 from Sichuan.

6.
张山，是一个著名的艺术家，出生于一个律师 家庭。他在广州度过了他的童年。
（用一
个句子来表达）

Zhangshan,
a
famous
artist,
who
was
born
of
a
lawyer
’
s
family,
spent
his
childhood
in
Guangzhou.

Born
of
a
lawyer
’
s
family,
Zhangshan
is
a
famous
artist,

who
spent
his
childhood
in
Guangzhou.


1
B
．外貌
,
性格

(
巧用
with
做定语
)
如；

1)


He is near-sighted /far-sighted guy with a pair of glasses on his nose.

2)

She is good-looking /ordinary- looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair.
3)


He is a tall and thin guy with thick eyebrows, looking very handsome.
4) Born in Germany, Einstein is a great scientist with an extraordinary imagination.

描述身材常用的形容词有
:
tall, short, of medium height
中等身材
; average height
一般身材
;

below average
低于平均身高
; fat, thin,

slim, big
，
overweight
超重
;

well-built
身材魁梧等
.
穿着：
smartly dressed
穿着得体

well dressed
穿的漂亮


neatly dressed
衣着干净整洁



有备无患


常用描写人物的形容词
:

determined

(
有毅力的
)
intelligent
（精明的）

honest

(
诚实的
)
diligent
（勤奋的）

healthy
（健康的）

strict (
严格的
)
outstanding (
杰出的
)
absent - minded
（心不在焉
的）




warm - hearted
（热心肠的

generous(
慷慨的
)
forgetful(
健忘的
)
independent (
独立的
)
talkative
（多话的
)
patient (
耐心的
)
considerate(
考虑周到的
)
enthusiastic
（热情的）

pessimistic(
悲观的
)
competent

有能力的

ambitious(
雄心的
)
humorous
（幽默的）

cautious

(
谨慎的
)
attractive
（有吸引力的）

modest(
谦虚的
)
optimistic(
乐观的
)
bad
-
tempered
（脾气不好
的）

easy - going
（温和宽容的）

energetic(
精力充沛
)
兴趣爱好：
be angry with sb for sth, be angry about, be delighted in doing, be interested in
English, be fond of music, be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, be sorry for, be strict in
one’s work, be worried about, enjoy doing, expect to do, feel surprised at, have a strong desire
to do, look forward to doing
sth., make rapid progress in, put one’s heart into, take a pleasure in
doing; work hard at his studies,

1
）
She was
neatly dressed, with
a calm face that showed a certain
strength.
.
她穿着整洁，满脸的恬静，表现出一种与众不同的力量

2. She was burning with anger.
她怒火中烧。

She was red
with anger
.
她因为发怒脸涨得通红。

He
was angry with
_ me because I
was crazy about
playing computer games.

由于我对玩游戏很着迷，他对我很生气
.

3.. A friendly smile will help you
win other
s’
heart.
.

友好的笑容能帮助你赢得别人的心。

4. He
used to study hard,
but when he is getting old , he is becoming
lazy and absent minded in
class
.



2
他原本学习很努力，但随着年龄的增长，他变得懒散而且上课心不在焉。

5. He is
an outstanding physicist,
who
is humorous and patient.


他一个杰出的物理学家，很幽默而且有耐心
.


C.
教育经历

(
注意尽量用非谓语动词
,
使文章精炼
)
如；

1
）
Majoring in
（主修）
Science, he graduated from
（毕业于）
a famous University in the
north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies
（出国深造）
.
2
）
Having graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University(
毕业于中
山大学英语系）
, she went on further education
（继续深造
)and received a doctor
'
s
degree
（获得博士学位
).
1. 1990
年，他考入北大，主修历史。

He was admitted to Beijing University in 1990 and was majored in



history.
2. 4
年前他出国深造并获得博士学位。

Four years ago he went abroad for further education and got a






doctor
’
s degree.

3.
小时候，他父亲对他很严格，所以他打下很好的英语基础。

In his childhood, his father was strict with him so he lay a good





English
foundation.

4.
毕业于清华大学物理系，他毕生致力于我国的科学研究。

Having graduated from the physics department of Qinghua University, he devoted his
whole life to the scientific research.

5.
他很乐观而且精力充沛，经常积极参加课余活动。

Being optimistic and energetic, he often takes an active part in






after- class
activities.

D
．生平

(< br>尽量用复合句倒装
,
非限定定语从句等，润色文章
)
如；

1
）
Not only is he interested in science, but also he
has a gift for
（对
—
有天赋）

music.
2
）
He
set a new world record of
swimming
（创造新的游泳世界纪录）
, which won a gold
medal for China Team.
3
）
So hard does he work that he
devotes almost all his lifetime to
（献身于）
our human
cause.
4
）
With great determination and perseverance
（有着毅力和决心）
, he took 37 years to
finish the book, which
makes a great contribution to
（对做出贡献）
China.
写出下列句子，注意使用短语和句型。


1.

他不仅对科学感兴趣，而且很有运动天赋。


2.

爱因斯坦（
Einstein
）不仅致力于科学研究，而且非常关心人类的和平和发展。


3.

只有当你对这门学科感兴趣时，你才可能取得快速的进步。


4.

只有凭着坚强的决心你才能够赢得这次比赛。

5.

刘翔赢得

04
年雅典冠军，打破
世界纪录
.
1. Not only is he interested in science but also he has a gift for sports.

2.
Not
only
did
Einstein
devote
all
his
life
to
scientific
research
but
also
he
cared
for

3