曼莎珠华2019年12月英语六级写作：图表题的逻辑结构

2021年1月18日发(作者：萧伯纳的故事)
2019年12月英语六级写作：图表题的逻辑结构

图表题(table, bar graph, pie chart, line graph)

图表题的写作逻辑结构：

Paragraph I：(1)概括描述图表：趋势描写;

(2)具体描述图表：必要数据支持(细节性)。

Paragraph II：(1)提出自己理由和观点(本段主题句);

(2)细节性分论点(主要是原因，用于支持自己的观点，至少两
点)。

Paragraph III：(1)预测未来和提出解决方法;

(2)总结全文和表达作者自己观点

【标题】Changes in People’s Diet

Directions： Write a three-paragraph composition to：

1. State the changes in people’s diet in the past five
years.

2. Give possible reasons for the changes.

3. Draw your own conclusion.

You should quote as few figures as possible.

【短文】Changes in People’s Diet

In the past five years there have been many changes in
people’s diet. Grain, as the main food of most Chinese, is
now playing a less important role, while the proportion of
some high-energy foods, such as milk and meat, has increased.

What has caused these changes? I think there are two
reasons. First, people now have more money. The price of meat
and milk is much higher than that of grain, so in the old
days people couldn’t afford them. Now they have enough money
to buy both meat and milk. Second, people nowadays pay more
attention to the elements of their diet. They look for a
well-balanced diet that will be good for their health.

In short, there have been changes in people’s diet in
the past five years because of financial and health reasons,
and there will be further changes in the future

【修改版】

As can be seen from the table, the past five years has
witnessed dramatic changes in people’s diet. Grain, as the
staple food of most Chinese, is now playing a less important
role in their diet, while the consumption of high quality
food such as meat, milk and fruit has greatly increased.

There are two factors leading to the change. For one
thing, people now enjoy a higher standard of living. In the
old days few families could afford meat and milk every day,
which often meant a big chunk of the family income. But now
people have enough money to taste a rich verity of foods. For
another, people of today attach more attention to nutrition.
They are not merely content to fill the stomach. They are
seeking the most reasonable diet which will do good to their
health.

In a word, with people’s standard of living getting
higher and higher, changes in their diet will be more obvious
and greater.