夏日天空战袍四级英语作文(几大题型)

2021年1月17日发(作者：项海帆)

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四级作文：

一、

常见段落展开：

(
一
)
现象段：
先用一句话概括现象的总体情况，即段落的主题句 ；然后具体描
述现象的突出表现或具体变化，
以支持主题句。
或者先说具体现象，然后用一句
话总结现象的严重性。

常用开头句型：

1.

Nowadays, more and more people
…

2.

As more people focus on
…
,
…
. has begun to draw more and more attention from
the public.
3.

In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of
…

4.

In the past three decades, China has witnessed dramatic improvement in
…

5.

With the development of
…
,
…
is becoming a more and more serious problem.
6.

Recently it has become a common phenomenon that
…

7.

…I
t
has become such a
serious problem that
it
has
aroused
the concern
from
the
whole society.
例子：

Losing Weight
1.

越来越多的人，尤其是女性热衷于减肥

2.

分析人们减肥的原因。

3.

盲目减肥可能会产生
副作用。









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四级作文评分档：
1-3
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4-6
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Nowadays,
more
and
more
people,
especially
young
female,
are
trying
to
lose
unwanted
weigh.
The
number
of
people taking
part
in all
kinds of fat farms or fitness clubs
has been on the rise in recent years. Besides, more and more
people
are
joining
the
army
of
being
on
diet.
In
order
to

1

keep fit, many young girls eat only one meal every day, and
some even do not eat anything.

练习：
Green Food
1.

今年来，
“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。

2.

分析这一现象产生的原因

3.

你对该现象的看法。

As more and more people focus on health diet, green food has begun to draw
more
and
more
attention
by
the
public.
In
recent
years,
the
market
demand
for
green
food
has
increased dramatically, and
all kinds of
green
food
have emerged
in an endless stream.


(
二
)
原因段：

1)There are three reasons for this.

2) The three reasons for this are as follows.

3) There are many factors accounting for this phenomenon.

4) The following reasons can account for
…

5
）
There
are
many
factors
that
may
account
for
it,
and
the
following
are
the
most
conspicuous aspects.
注：列举两点：

on the one hand, on the other hand,
或

for one thing, for another,
列举三点：


to begin with, moreover, what
’
s the most important;

或

in the first place,
in the second place, last but not least

或

First of all
…
, moreover, besides
…
)
例子：
Losing Weight
1.

越来越多的人，尤其是女性热衷于减肥

2.

分析人们减肥的原因。

3.

盲目减肥可能会产生副作用。

There are three main reasons behind this craze in losing weight. Firstly
, as we see,
most
young
people,
especially
the
women,
want
to
have
a
better
figure.
They
try
to
lose
weight
to
look
more
beautiful.
Secondly,
quite
a
few
people
want
to
reduce
excessive fat for their health since obesity is often very harmful to health. Thirdly
, still
some people
are out of work
need, the
majority of whom are
actors
and actresses. In
order
to
meet
the
role
requirements,
sometimes
they
have
to
lose
much
weight
in
a
short time.

练习：
Green Food
1.
今年来，
“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。

2.
分析这一现象产生的原因

3.
你对该现象的看法。


2

The
three
reasons
for
this
are
as
follows.
First
of
all,
compared
with
ordinary
food,
green
food
is
healthier,
safer
and
more
nutritious.
Moreover,
nowadays,
many
vegetables
are
polluted
because
of
the
usage
of
agricultural
chemicals,
while
green
food
is free of pollution. Besides, with the
improvement of the
living standards,
more
people can afford
a
healthier but
more expensive
lifestyle. So
green
food, despite
its
higher price, still becomes people
’
s favorite food.


（三）方法段：

1) The following measures can be taken to
…

2)
Obviously
,
it
is
necessary
to
take
some
effective
measures
to
reduce
this
phenomenon.

3)
Considering
the
seriousness
of
the
problem,
effective
measures
should
be
taken
to
…

4)
Considering
the
great
harm
brought
by
…
,
I
think
it
is
high
time
that
we
took
effective measures to prevent
…

5
）
To put such a serious problem
to an end,
in
my
mind, calls for the efforts
from all
sides.
例子：
How to Eliminate Cheating on Campus
1.
当前校园内存在许多作弊现象；

2.
解决这一问题的办法是
…

Nowadays, instead of listening attentively in class and working hard after class, a
number of students adopt all kinds of dishonest
methods
to get
high scores
in exams.
It
has become such a serious problem that
it
has aroused
the concern
from
the whole
society
.
To put such a serious problem to an end, in my mind, calls for the efforts from all
sides.
First
of
all,
the
university
authority
should
make
it
clear
that
any
cheating
behaviors
in
the
examinations,
from
whispering
and
copying,
receiving
answers
via
mobile phones to asking ringers for help, will be severely punished with no exception.
Moreover,
teachers of all subjects
should
go all the
way to
restore
honesty by
setting
an example for the youth through speaking sincerely and behaving truthfully. Last but
not
least,
young
students,
should
be
taught
integrity
is
the
prerequisite
to
an
upright
and
responsible
citizen
so
as
to
learn
to
despise
and
fight
dishonest
behaviors
throughout the life.
How can anybody expect to
lead a
meaningful
life
until
he
is
far
fro
m any kind
of cheating behaviors? Only
when all of
us join
in
the efforts of eliminating cheating
at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.

练习：


3

My View on Global Food Crisis
1.

目前全世界面临粮食危机

2.

简要分析其原因

3.

作为公民，尤其大学生应该怎么做

Global
food
crisis
has
become
such
a
serious
problem
that
it
has
aroused
the
concern
from
the
whole
society
.
Even
the
year
2008
is
even
defined
as
The
Y
ear
of
Global Food Crisis.
There
are
three
reasons
for
this. First of all,
global
food crisis can be
said
to be
triggered
（引发）

by
the
fast
population
growth
in
recent
decades.
With
more
and
more
people
to
be
fed,
we
have
to
find
better
ways
to
increase
our
agricultural
production.
Moreover,
while we are striving
for a
higher civilization, the
damage
we
have done to the environment make much of the worlds
’
soil deteriorate
（
恶化，
变坏）
.
With the
land
yielding
little,
there
is
no wonder
that people
will
go
hungry
.
Besides,
many
farmers
in
some
countries
are
leaving
the
land
because
the
cost
of
production
exceeds the return. Some of
them
work
at
jobs off the
land, and some
just
lay waste
(
撂荒，损毁
) the land altogether.
Solving
the
global
food
crisis
is
a
big
issue,
and
needs
the
concern
and
cooperation of every
nation of
the world. On an
individual
level, we college students
should be frugal (
节约的
)about the food, and never waste a bit of it.

Live a Low- carbon Life
1
．低碳生活日渐成为热门话题

2
．低碳生活的
意义

3
．如何做到低碳生活

low-carbon
life has become an
increasingly
hot topic.
Actually,
low-carbon
life
is
not
only
a
fashionable
term,
but
also
a
strategic
choice
concerning
the
future
of
human
beings.




Effectively
reducing
the
carbon
emission,
low-carbon
life
constitutes
energy
conservation
and
environment
protection
means,
which
is
helpful
to
slow
down
the
pace of
global warming and environmental
worsening, bringing benefit to the
future
generations.
Then
how
to
live a
low-carbon
life? Everyone
may
interpret
it
in their own
way
in every detail of daily
life, but public awareness and passion
for saving energy
is the
key
for
this
campaign.
Furthermore,
energy-saving
habits
should
be
also
advocated
and promoted,
for example, substituting
a bicycle
for a car,
using
recyclable bags
for
shopping, climbing
the stairs
instead of taking
the elevator and so on. It's certain that

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As
more and
more people are concerned about climate and environment
issues,
















if enough people live a low-carbon life, everyday and everywhere, it could change the
history
.

(
四
)
我的看法段

As for me/personally, as far as I am concerned, from my point of view,
…

例子：
Green Food
1.

今年来，
“绿色食品”变得越来越流行。

2.

分析这一现象产生的原因

3.

你对该现象的看法。

As for me, nowadays the market is full of real and fake green food, making many
consumers confused. Therefore, the
government
must
strengthen
the supervision and
administration
of
green
food
market.
Besides,
consumers
should
increase
the
knowledge of green food. Only in this way can green food play a more positive role in
people
’
s life.

练习：
Fashion Pursuit in Colleges
1.

大学生喜欢追求时髦

2.

有些人支持，有些人反对

3.

我的看法

Fashion Pursuit in Colleges
Nowadays
students
in
colleges
and
universities
are
in
hot
pursuit
of
fashion,
which
is
an
unquestionable
fact.
They
are
crazy
for
everything
that
is
prevailing
in
society
, such as owning luxurious mobile phones and wearing blonde curls.
Some
people
think
it
acceptable
for
college
students
to
follow
fashion.
College
students are
very
flexible
in thought and are easy
to accept
new things,
so
following
fashion
may well reflect their pioneering spirit and
may
help them
form a
good
habit
for their future career. On the contrary
, some people have the idea that it is imperative
to
resist
the
fashion.
College
students
should
concentrate
themselves
exclusively
on
studies, which should b eon the top of their agenda. Holding the right concept of value
makes sense.
To earn an
impressive academic performance, we college students
must
pour determined efforts into study and pay no attention to vogue.


As
far as I am concerned, college students
should
have the spirit of pioneering.
However,
the
spirit
cannot
always
be
shown
by
fashion,
but
by
their
academic
performance.
Accordingly
，
we
should
compete
with
our
peers
for
better
scholarly
achievement instead of fashionable clothes.

（五）双刃剑型作文：

第一段：
anything else, ____ has both advantages and disadvantages.
2.
there
is
a
good
side
and
a
bad
side
to
everything,
and
______
are
no
exception.

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3.
Nowadays,
…
are
playing
a
more
and
more
important
role
in
people
’
s
daily life. However, people
’
s opinions are still divided on this point.
中间段：

1.

Those who are in favor of private cars claim that it has a lot of advantages.




Those
who
are
opposed
to
the
development
of
private
cars
hold
that
disadvantages are many
.
2. The main advantages of
…
are as follows
…
.
However, as every coin has two sides, the disadvantages are also obvious.

结尾段：
1. Up until now, we can see it clearly that _________ is not beneficial or
harmful in itself. The key lies in the user---so long as we can make proper use of it,
it can be most helpful to us in many respects.

2. All
in all,
we can safely come to the conclusion that the pros outweigh the
cons.
The
past
twenty
years
witnessed
the
fast
development
of
_______
along
with
national
economy
.
A
brighter
future
is
awaiting
us
if
we
make
good
use
of
_________.
例子：

Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars
1.
有人认为私家有很多优势；

2.
有人认为私家车有很多问题；

3.
你的看法












Advantages and Disadvantages of Private Cars
Nowadays,
private
cars
are
playing
a
more
and
more
important
role
in
people
’
s daily life. However, people
’
s opinions are still divided on this point.
Those
who are
in
favor of private
cars claim
that
it
has a
lot of advantages.
Firstly, the development of private cars
will contribute a
lot to
national economy
as a
whole. Secondly
,
for
individuals
who own a private car, they will
no
longer
have
to wait
for the crowded bus.
Last but
not
least, people can
go sightseeing to
neighboring scenic spots on weekends in their own cars.
Those
who
are
opposed
to
the
development
of
private
cars
hold
that
disadvantages are
many
. In the
first place, the general
living standard
is still quite
low,
so
the
time
is
not
yet
ripe
to
develop
private
cars
at
present.
In
the
second
place,
large
numbers
of
private
cars
will
again
pollute
the
environment.
Finally,
the
development
of
private
cars
has
to
be
in
accordance
with
the
fundamental
improvement of transportation. If the road
is always jammed,
how can
we
enjoy
the pleasure of driving?
All in all, we can safely come the conclusion that the pros outweigh the cons.
The past twenty
years
witnessed the
fast development of the
automobile
industry

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