爱情自有天意34关于爱好的初中英语作文指导

2021年1月17日发(作者：瞿林)
关于爱好的初中英语作文指导

题目

进入初四以来，面临即将到来 的中考的压力，学生的课业负担日
益繁重。在此种情况下，有人认为初四学生应该放弃爱好，专注
学习，不要在时间紧迫的条件下浪费更多的时间；但还有人认为
“
磨刀不误砍柴工
”
，在课余时间坚持自己的爱好，不但不耽误学
习，还可以调解大脑，促进学习。另外，爱好还可 以怡情养性，
陶冶情操增长知识，开阔视野。请就这一话题阐述你的观点。







要求：观点鲜明，行文流畅。





不少于
80
字，运用至少两种时态。



写作指导

1
、文章开头示例：

As a student in Grade Nine/Grade-Nine student, we are under great
pressure
due
to
the
coming
entrance
examination.
Therefore,
some
people suggest we should give up hobbies in order to focus on study.
However,
I
hold
the
different
idea.
I
think
we
should
keep
our
hobbies for the following reasons.
2
、论证：

正方（

advantages/pros)

1. make life more rich and colorful

2. find out what your strong points and passion lie in/find what your
identity is

3. have a sense of achievement/success/accomplishment

4. increase your knowledge that we cannot learn in class and expand
our views/ broaden one’s horizons


5.
relax oneself/feel
refreshed
and
then when we
go
back
to
study,
we can focus on it with high efficiency (All work and no play makes
Jack a dull boy.)/study more effectively and efficiently/a good circle
6. bring us closer to success

7.
have
a
positive
attitude
towards
life/Life
will
take
on
a
new
dimension

8.
become
an
all-rounded/well- rounded
student
and
increase
your
competitive edge in the future

9.

become a talented person instead of a bookworm
10

Make us healthy both physically and mentally
11. make more friends with those who share the same

hobby with
us


常见的错误

Frequent mistakes
I
完
整
句
子
与
片
段

I
Complete
sentences
and
sentence
fragments
1
）逗号错误

1) Comma faults:
错误
Faulty: