四个坚持中考英语作文背诵范文(带翻译)22797

2021年1月16日发(作者：俞仁夫)
写作技巧

一、了解高分作文的特点
要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点：
1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。
2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3、要点齐全，不缺要点。
4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。
6、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。
7、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
8、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。
9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用 某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自
然就对该作文有好感了。
10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累，巧准备
要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：
1、牢记课标词汇是基础
一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文的基础。
2、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法
要想作文不扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少 。怎么能够减少语病呢？这就要求我们在平时的学习过程
中反复通过练习，掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法 。例如，对于as soon as 、stop some body from doing something 、
other 、another等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式
高分作文有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量， 你的水平高人一筹。这由何而来？靠我们在平时学习过
程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文， 谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思“帮助”，假如你就用一个
动词“help”，岂不显得你词汇贫 乏？假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用help、give somebody a hand、 give a hand
to somebody 、be in need of 等以表达“帮助”同一个意思，岂不更好呢？
像这样的例子很多，比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的“表示姓名的方式”就有：My name is Jim. I’m Jim.
I’m called/named Jim. I’m a boy called /named /with the name of Jim. 等等。
表达年龄的方式有：She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She
is a girl aged 12.等等。
很显然，使用高级一点的更好。
4、加强练习，积累经验
学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水平。
5、充分利用作文范文
很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢？首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会 用到哪些词
或者句子等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作 时选用。
另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。
6、背诵一些谚语和警句
作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。


三、精心审题，沉着写初稿
很多同学看到作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整洁，影响得分。
其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢？
审题主要要做一下事情：
1、审人称、时态、体裁等
审题时，要求我 们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问题解决后至少不
会犯很严 重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。你想
想，那还能得高分吗？
2、明确必须表达的要点
高分作文有个特点是要点齐全。 如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把必须表达的要
点勾出来。保证不漏掉任 何一个要点。
3、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个？
4、确定好如何分段
就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些？
四、耐心修改，提炼句子
很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事 了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去修改，相信会
让你受益匪浅的。
1、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等
当我们掌握了一定量的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时 不会让你都运用到的。这时为了展示你与众不同的能力，
你务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英 语作文为例，它就要求写“帮助老人的感受”。至于“老人”的表达
法，有old people和the old 。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的“病人”的表达法有sick
people ，patients ，the sick ，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢？当然是the sick了。
2、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点
我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英语表达的东西。怎么办 呢？换为最简单的表达法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文
题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增 进友谊。很多学生翻译不来“增进”，面对这样的问题怎么办呢？
怎么不换个说法呢？你看，If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our
friendship longer .不就达到目的了吗？
3、大胆改变句型，使之生辉
例如，我们将一些句子改为感 叹句，复合句、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的高水平和能力。何
乐而不为呢？
4高度关注句与句 、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。
5、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文
一篇好的作文 ，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，那才是大公告成
了 。
一、Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers.
There were few factories. The people didn’t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard
life.
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making
money. Now there are many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can
take buses or drive their own cars to go to work. Many people have cell phones and personal computers.
People’s living conditions have improved a lot. Thanks to the government’s efforts. My hometown is becoming
more and more beautiful.
二、Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.
It’s our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our
neighborhood clean and tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant
more trees and we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields.
We shouldn’t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustn’t pick the flowers or step on
the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more
beautiful and our life will be better and better.
三、Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life. What
should we do to improve our environment?
We should plant more trees. And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers,
lakes and fields . Whenever we see litter on the ground, we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin.
Don’t spit in public places. Don’t draw on public walls. It’s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.
四、Pollution around us
In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment is becoming worse and worse.
It’s very bad for our life. Now many people have air- conditioners and cars, they produce (give off) waste
gas. More and more trees are being cut down. There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand). We
often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is quite dirty. We haven’t enough
clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. It’s very necessary and important to protect the
environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much
more beautiful, and our life will be better and better .
五、Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans. It’s our duty to take care
of the nature around us. Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them.
We shouldn’t kill wild animals, and we must protect forests because they are animals’ home. We must plant
more trees and grass, they can make the world greener. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives
we will have. Let’s do our best to make the world beautiful.
六、Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in
public places, such as in the library, in the class. We shouldn’t leave rubbish here and there. Don’t
draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school. We should keep the classroom clean and
tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for our school,
I’m sure our school will be more beautiful.
七、My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees
are around my house. I can see a lot of farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and
fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it is getting dark, the moon is bright
in the sky. It’s very quiet. What a nice place I live in!
八、How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other language
in China. English is widely spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But
how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it
well. At school, we should learn to hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time in
practicing English. If we keep on working hard at English, we will be able to be good at it one day.
九、How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well. I like English
very much. I always preview and master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class, I listen carefully,
speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary. After class, I do my homework carefully. I
watch English movies and listen to English songs. I have booked an English newspaper. It’s Times English
Post, I can learn a lot from it . I am not afraid of remembering the new words because I master many good
methods. I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day. That’s all.
十、How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened
to the teacher attentively in class, and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English
teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English texts aloud and listened to the English
tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It’s spoken by most people in the USA, Great Britain,
Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries
of the world. It's widely used for business between different countries. More than three quarters of the
information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much knowledge. English is used
by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as
it is so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well. Now let’s work hard at it and see who learns it faster
and better in our class.
十二、I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They
have greatly changed our life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things
for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness
to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become better and better. Now I am a
high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my lessons to make my dream come true.
十三、I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people
to come to China from all over the world. Most of them don’t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting
places in China. I can be one of the guides. I can make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now
on, I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best to make it come true.
十四、I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It’s very useful. I often search the Internet
for some information. I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from
it. I can also download the information that I need and I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my
friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily
life. I like the internet very much. How about you / Will you have a try?
十五、The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we can’t do work better. We can
go shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet.
It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information
as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the Internet for long time, especially for
young people to play computer games. It’s bad for our eyes and health. If we make good use of the Internet,
it will be our best friends and help us a lot.
十六、Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The
smallest computer is as big as a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more
important in many ways. It has touched the lives of everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps
us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot fun.
十七、The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days,
but two or three days without water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes. Some
factories even pour waste water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty
that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.
Let’s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.
十八、Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is
necessary for all plants. They need water to grow. People can’t live without water. Plants will die without
water. It is important to all living things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water,
so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting water or polluting water and help keep the water
clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.
十九、I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From
this term I keep on running when I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with
my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired when I am studying. And I improve
a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible.
二十、Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei. I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 2000. I’m studying at Yucai Middle School.
I learn Chinese, math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite
sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and computer. I’m very happy to live in a happy family. There
are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother is a teacher. We love each other very much.
二十一、My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never
late for school and he does well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very
poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His parents are both teachers. They are very busy,
so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very strong. He likes
playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets
on well with us. Everyone in our class likes him.
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假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行 了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语
写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的 以下讨论结果：1.节水节电；2.垃圾分类；3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，骑
自行车或乘坐公 交车。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about
it.
We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better
turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water is also
very important. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, and we might recycle some of them. What’s more,
we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of paper so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More
importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which
contributes to a cleaner world.