时差七小时最新中考英语作文背诵范文(带翻译)

2021年1月16日发(作者：祝天祥)
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写作技巧
一、了解高分作文的特点 要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作 文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下
特点：
1
、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。
2
、分段合理。全文分段一般 不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。
3
、要点齐全，不缺要点。
4
、首尾呼应，自然成一体。
5、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。
6
、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。
7
、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。
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、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。
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、全文中同一个意 思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自 然就对该
作文有好感了。
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、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。
二、勤积累，巧准备 要想作文得高分，除了了解以上的特点外，还要在平时的学习中注意一下方面：
1
、牢记课标词汇是基础 一篇作文多数是由积极词汇写出来的，这些词汇主要来源于课标。因 此，牢记课标词汇是写好作文
的基础。
2
、掌握课标词汇和短语的用法 要想作文不 扣分或者少扣分，有个要求是作文的语病少。怎么能够减少语病呢？这就要求我们
在平时的学习过程 中反复通过练习， 掌握课标词汇和短语等的用法。 例如，对于
as soon as
、
stop some body from doing
something
、
other
、
another
等的用法很多学生就经常出错。
3
、高度重视同一个意思的多种表达方式 高分作文 有个特点是：让老师发现你拥有丰富的词汇量，你的水平高人一筹。这由何
而来？靠我们在平时学习过 程中，逐步积累起来的。比如：今年的中考作文，谈的就是帮助他人的问题。同一个意思 “帮助 ”，
ha nd to
somebody
、
be in need of
等以表达 “帮助 ”同一个意思，岂不更好呢？
假如你就用一个动 词“
help,
岂不显得你词汇贫乏？假如你在作文中不断地变换方式，用
help
、
give somebody a han d
、
give a
像这样的例子很多， 比如：大家都觉得很简单又很基础的 “表示姓名的方式 ”就有：
My name is Jim. I
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m Jim. I
'
m
called/named Jim. I
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m a boy/ncamlledd /with the name of Jim.
等等。
表达年龄的方式有：
She is 12. She is 12 years old. She is aged 12. She is a girl of 12(years old) . She is a girl aged 12.
很显然，使用高级一点的更好。
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、加强练习，积累经验 学习语言最好的方法是运用，作文也不例外。我们要想作文得高分，必须经常练习，才能提高水
平。
5
、 充分利用作文范文 很多资料书上都有作文范文。诚然，他们有很多值得借鉴的地方。
我们怎么利用它们呢？首先，我们先不要看文章，自己先思考一下：假如你来写，你会怎么去写，会用到 哪些词 或者句子
等。然后去比较，勾出其中的好词佳句，并且把它摘录在专门的作文册子上。供写作时选用。
另外，背一些范文也是很有必要的。
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、 背诵一些谚语和警句 作文中如果出现恰当的谚语和警句，会有锦上添花的效果。
三、精心审题，沉着写初稿 很多同学看到 作文后，下笔就写。这是不对的。一则很容易写偏题、写出病句，涂改后书面又不整
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洁 ，影响得分。 其实，会写作文的同学都知道，审题非常的重要，可以防止很多毛病，提高得分。那么我们审题要做些什么呢？
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审题主要要做一下事情：
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、审人称、时态、体裁等 审题时， 要求我们要弄清楚这篇文章主要使用的人称是第几人称，什么时态、什么体裁。这些问
题解决后至少不 会犯很严重的错误：全文皆错。例如，如果一篇文章，本来应该一般过去时，你的每句话却用了一般现在时态。< br>你想 想，那还能得高分吗？
2
、明确必须表达的要点 高分作文有个特点是要点齐全 。如果漏掉一个要点，则要扣分。因此我们必须认真细读其要求，把
必须表达的要 点勾出来。保证不漏掉任何一个要点。
3
、罗列出可能会用到的短语、句型，确定好使用哪个？
4
、确定好如何分段 就是要确定好，将哪些要点放在一个自然段里面，首段、尾段打算写哪些？
四、耐心修改，提炼句子 很多同学写完作文后就感觉大事已毕，高兴地放下笔就了事了。其实，这时候，不妨从以下方面去
修改， 相信会 让你受益匪浅的。
1
、巧妙选择使用高级词汇、短语、句型等 当我们掌握了一定量 的同意表达法之后，在写作时有时不会让你都运用到的。这
时为了展示你与众不同的能力， 你务必要选择高级的。例如，就以今年中考的英语作文为例，它就要求写 “帮助老人的感
受 ”。至于 “老人 ”的表达法， 有
old people
和
the old
。使用后者的同学自然能力比前者强。同样的道理，作文中的 “病
人 ”的表达法有
sick people
，
patients
，
the sick
，你认为使用哪个更能显示你的高水平呢？当然是
the sick
了。
2
、巧妙使用低级表达法代替自己的难点 我们写作时难免会遇到一些难以用英 语表达的东西。怎么办呢？换为最简单的表达
法吧。例如：我市今年中考作文 题，就要求学生表达一个意思：帮助同学，可以增进友谊。很多学生翻译不来 “增进 ”，面对
这样的问题怎么办呢？怎 么不换个说法呢？你看，
If we help our classmates with their study and other things , we can make our
friendship longer .
不 就达到目的了吗？
3
、大胆改变句型，使之生辉 例如，我们将一些句子改为感叹句，复合句 、强调句、反意疑问句、将句子改得更能显示你的
高水平和能力。何 乐而不为呢？
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高度关注句与句 、段与段之间的衔接问题。务必做到过渡自然，衔接紧凑。
5
、适当引用个别谚语或警句，来提高作文档次。
五、一丝不苟抄誊作文 一篇好的 作文，经过审题、修改之后，务必要一丝不苟地抄誊在答题卷上，再认真地仔细检查一遍，
那才是大公告 成 了。
一、
Great changes in my hometown
More than twenty years ago, my hometown was just a small, old and poor town. Most of people were farmers. There were few
factories. The people didn
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t have enough food to eat and wore old clothes. They had a hard life.
Great changes have taken place in the past twenty years. The people have found a lot of ways of making money. Now there are
many tall buildings. They are very beautiful. Roads are wide and clean. People can take buses or drive their own cars to go to work.
Many people have cell phones and personal computers. People
'
s living conditions have improved
to the government
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s efforts. My hometown is becoming more anrde mbeoautiful.
二、
Save the earth
How to protect the environment has become one of the biggest problems in the world.
It
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s our duty to protect our environment. No matter where we live, we should do something to keep our neighborhood clean and
tidy. We can collect waste paper or other waste things for recycling. We should plant more trees and we should prevent those factories
from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields. We shouldn
'
t leave rubbish everywhere and spit in public places. We mustn
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ptick the flowers or step on the grass in public. If everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more
beautiful and our life will be better and better.
三、
Improve our environment
Good environment can make people feel happy. To improve the environment means to qualify our life. What should we do to
improve our environment?
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We should plant more trees. And we should prevent those factories from pouring waste water into rivers, lakes and fields . Whenever
we see litter on the ground , we should pick it up and throw it into a dustbin. Don
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t spit in public places
on public walls. It
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s our duty to keep our earth clean and tidy.
四、
Pollution around us
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s very bad In recent years our life is becoming better and better. But our environment i s becoming worse and worse. It
our life. Now many people have air-conditioners and cars, they produce (give off) waste gas. More and more trees are being cut down.
There are so much sand on the earth (leaving only sand). We often see factories pour waste into rivers or lakes. Water in the river is
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quite dirty. We haven
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t enough clean water to drink in cities. Now we are in danger. Ity and
important to protect the environment well. I think if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, the world will become much more
beautiful, and our life will be better and better .
五、
Make our world more beautiful !
Protecting the environment is becoming more and more important to humans. It
'
ousr duty to take care of the nature around us.
Animals and plants are our best friends, and we should share the world with them. We shouldn and we must protect forests because they
are animals
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home. We must plant more trees and grass, they can make the greener. The more beautiful the world is, the happier lives
we will have. Let
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s do our best to make the world be
六、
Keep our school clean
We are studying in this school. It is our duty to keep it clean and tidy. It is not good to spit in public places, such as in the library, in
the class. We shouldn leave rubb
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isht here and there. Don
'
t draw pictures on the wall, they influence the look of our school. We
should keep the classroom clean and tidy. And we should do some cleaning often. If everyone tries his best to do something useful for
our school, I
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m sure our school will be more beautiful.
七、
My country life
I like to live in the countryside. I live in a small village. There is a river near it. Lots of trees are around my house. I can see a lot of
farms and birds. There is less noise. The air here is cleaner and fresher. There are fewer cars. I read aloud early in the morning. When it
is getting dark, the moon is bright in the sky. It
'
s very quiet. What a nice place I live
八、
How to learn English well
As we know, English has become an international language. It is more popular than any other languag e in China. English is widely
spoken in the world and it is the most useful language around the world. But how to learn it well?
The best way is to use it all the time. If we can talk in English, think in English we can learn it well. At school, we should learn to
hear, speak, read and write carefully. We should spend enough time in practicing English. If we keep on working hard at English, we will
be able to be good at it one day.
九、
How I learn English
Hello, everyone. It is my honor to talk with all of you about how to learn English well. I like English very much. I always preview and
master the main idea of the lesson before class. In class, I listen carefully, speak loudly and write carefully and take notes if necessary.
Times English Post, I can learn a lot from it . I am not aefrmaiedmobf erring the new words
because I master many good methods. I hope you work hard at English and make progress every day. That
After class, I do my homework carefully. I watch English movies and listen to English songs. I have booked an English newspaper. It
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s
十、
How I improved my English
When I began to learn English, I was poor at it. I was quite worried at that time. Later I 1istened to the teacher attentively in class,
and made notes carefully. If I had any question, I asked my English teacher or my classmates for help. Every morning I read the English
texts aloud and listened to the English tapes. In the evening, after finishing my homework, I always read some English and magazines.
Now I am one of the best students at English in my class.
十一、
The importance of English
English is the most widely spoken in the world. It
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s spoken by most people in the USA, Great
Britsatirna,liaC,anada,
and New Zealand. It's also very widely used as a foreign language in many other countries of the world. It's widely used for business
between different countries. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English, too. It is really a bridge to so much
knowledge. English is used by travellers and business people around the world. It's one of the world's most important languages as it is
so widely used. That's why more and more people in China are interested in learning English.
English is so useful that we must learn it well. Now let
class.
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s work hard at it and see who learns it faster and bet
十二、
I want to be an inventor
TVs, telephone, fridges, cars, planes, computers and many other things are important inventions. They have greatly changed our
life. Many people have their ideas and wishes. They want to invent some new things for the world. I am one of them. I want to be an
inventor in the future, Inventions can bring fun and happiness to our life and make our daily life more convenient. Our life will become
better and better. Now I am a high school student. I will try my best to work hard at my
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lessons to make my dream come true.
十三、
I want to be a tour guide
I want to be a tour guide because Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. There will be many people to come to China from all
over the world. Most of them don
'
t know Chinese. They want to visit many interesting places in China. I cf an be o the guides. I can
make much money, too. How happy I will be! So from now on, I must study hard. I am going to learn English every day. I will try my best
to make it come true.
十四、
I like the Internet
The Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. It
'
s very usseeafruclh. IthoefteInternet for some
information.
I can read the latest news, do some shopping, and get all kinds of information from it. I can also download the information that I need and
I can send e-mails and make telephone calls to my friends on the internet. The most important thing is that I am able to study all my
lessons on the Internet.
The Internet makes my life more interesting and colorful and it has a wide effect on my study and daily life. I like the internet very
much. How about you / Will you have a try?
十五、
The Internet
The Internet is becoming more and more important to us . Without it, we can
'
t do work better. We can go shopping withou
going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We
can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible. But now, some of us work, study or play on the
Internet for long time, especially for young people to play computer games. It
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s bad forhoeuarltehy.
eIfswaend
make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friends and help us a lot.
十六、
Computer
Computer is a wonderful machine. It's a great invention in many years. It develops very quickly. The smallest computer is as big as
a note-book. We call it pocket computer. Computer becomes more and more important in many ways. It has touched the lives of
everyone, even people in faraway villages. It helps us to do with all kinds of information and we get knowledge from it. It can give us a lot
fun.
十七、
The importance of water
Of all the things we eat and drink, water is the most important. We can live without food for many days, but two or three days
without water, usually makes people die.
However, not all of people understand this. They keep throwing rubbish into the rivers or lakes. Some factories even pour waste
water into the river. As a result, many rivers and lakes have become so dirty that the water is no longer safe for people to drink.
Let
'
s do our best to keep the water clean to save ourselves.
十八、
Water
Water is very important for our life. Every day we use water to drink, too cook and to wash. Water is necessary for all plants. They
need water to grow. People can
'
t live without water. Plants will die without water. It is important to algl livin
things. However, many people pollute lakes and rivers with waste water, so we must stop some people or some factories from wasting
water or polluting water and help keep the water clean. At the same time we should save as much water as possible.
十九、
I like sports
I feel that taking exercise is good for our health. I often felt tired when I was studying before. From this term I keep on running when
I get up in the morning. After class I often go to play basketball with my friends. Now I feel much better than before and I never feel tired
when I am studying. And I improve a lot in my lessons. So please take exercise as often as possible.
二十、
Introduce yourself
My name is Li Lei. I was born in Fuzhou on December 15, 2000. I
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m studying at Yucai Middle School. I learn
math, English, physics, chemistry, politics, and so on. I like English best. My favorite sport is football. My hobbies are drawing and
computer. I
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m very happy to live in a happy family. There are 3 people in my family. My father is a doctor. My mother isa
teacher. We love each other very much.
二十一、
My best friend
My best friend is --- He is 15 years old. We are both in the same class. He works very hard. He is never late for school and he does
well in all his lessons. He is always ready to help others. My math is very poor, so he often helps me with my math after class. His
parents are both teachers. They are very busy, so he often helps do the housework at home. He is a little shorter than me but he is very
strong. He likes playing football very much at school. We often play football together and he plays it pretty well. He gets on well with us.
Everyone in our class likes him.
假定你是李华，最近你们班就 “低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友
Jack
来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写
封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：
1.
节水节电；
2.
垃圾分类；
3.
少用纸巾，重拾手帕；
4.
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