在线翻译词典2016年10月浙江省英语首考试题和解析

2021年1月7日发(作者：卫靖)
10月首考书面表达评析
◆题型解读

和以往的高考英语命题作文不同，读 后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂
字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络和关系。续写这篇短文 时，考生需要明白故事的发展进程、
前因后果、地理位置变化、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生顺 着文章的思路，根据线
索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用英语表达出来。同时，在组织语 言时，切
记使用5个以上给出的提示词。

◆故事主线

已知线索：

吵架——出走——迷路——失联——自救——思念——寻路——直升机— —飞离……
拂晓……

可续写线索：

失望？坚信？曲折？直升机？Tom？自救？获救？

◆续写词汇

已给提示词汇：

Jane, Tom, lake, walk, climb, at a distance, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse

话题激活词汇：

环境：forest, stream, rock, berry, valley, steep, cave, lake, waterfall (人口、环境与自然)

困难：hunger, starve, thirsty, injure, broken, blood, panic, shelter, survive (survival),
suffer, cold, severe (天气与自然灾害)

活动: walk, climb, fall, crawl, taste, attempt, struggle to one’s feet, make one’s way to,
pick up (人体与动作)

情绪：to one’s great joy, break down

救援：rescue team, doctor, search for, spot (天气与自然灾害)

意志品质：calm, courage, will (性格与行为特征)

评价：amazing, make it

Possible versions:
1.
Paragraph 1:
But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Jane had to stay alone in
the forest for another cold night. Although she felt a little sad, she didn’t get fearful. She
thought about Tom. “He must have called for those helicopters. Maybe he was in one of
them and will come back again! I have to guide him tomorrow.” She fell asleep and
dreamed of seeing Tom.
Paragraph 2: