仿写金色花开放性作文如何写

2014

高三

开放性作文如何写？

一、审题最为关键

审题

看图片

开放思路

应根据画面联想生发，不能游离于漫画意旨之外找材料。

立意议论

应在对漫画主题准确理解的前提下，选择最佳角度切题立意。 要集中一点，

力求说透。最好不要就画论画，应抓住漫画所揭示的本质，广泛联系现实， 写出深度来。行

文过程中力求多照应画面、涉及画意。要扣紧实际生活来确定立意、选择 论据，论证力求深

刻透彻，脱离漫画寓意或不联系相应实际，都属于脱题、偏题。

二．开放作文的四个步骤：

起

用自己的语言对画面进行简明、清楚叙述

承

紧承叙述，引出观点（话题）

（力求自然、准确）

转

联系实际，摆事实，讲道理

（力求深度、力度）

合

综合上文，再申主旨（

力求完整、有力）

描图

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解图

议图

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圆图

描图

用

和

一般现在时

描述图片内容，

描图时 做到内容充实、

具体、

形象、

生动。

描图 时不加入个人观点。

描图是为下文对漫画的理解奠定基础，

要根据所要阐明的理解内 容有的放矢、

中心突出，

而并非仅仅将漫画中的所有看到的内容都逐一罗 列出来。

描图篇幅一般不超过

1/3

。

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词句模板◇

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．阐述图画内容与主题的句型有：

(1)As is shown in the picture…

(2)As we can see in the picture…

(3)In the picture we can see that…

(4)From the picture I can see…

(5)What an interesting picture!

(6)As can be seen in the picture…

2

．阐明图画寓意的句型有：

(

1)The picture is trying to tell us that…

(2)The picture reflects a common social problem/phenomenon…

(3)The picture vividly shows…

(4)The picture conveys a message that…

(5)I think the picture wants to show us that…

(6)From the picture, we can draw a concl

usion that…

(7)As the picture suggests…

(8)This picture makes me think a lot about…

3.

总结性的句型有

It is obvious/clear/evident/apparent

that…

There’s no doubt that

Only by doing…

can we …

Only in this way… can we…

As long as… we can…

The more… the more…

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In my opinion, Whatever we meet in our life,we should .....

造句

：

只有通过这种方法，我们才能达成目标。

只有通过努力学习，我们才能被理想中的大学录取。

毫无疑问我们会成功。

读的书越多，获得的知识越多。

全品听课手册一轮

P202

[2012?

上海卷

]

Directions

：

Write an English composition in 120

－

150 words according to the

instructions given below in Chinese.

上周一，

你在一所小学观摩了小 女孩

Amy

所在班级的两堂绘画课

(

如图所示

)

，

回家后你

用英语写了一篇日记，内容包括 ：

●

对两堂绘画课的具体描述；

●

你从中获得的启发。

——

精

彩

美

文

——

June 8, 2012

Fine

At a primary school, I saw in one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting

out

of

footprints.

By

contrast,

the

same

student

used

a

brush

to

make

a

breathtaking

landscape

painting

—

so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the singing birds.

“Keep your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” It's this famous saying on success that

lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded

and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success.

So grand was the scenery portrayed in the second painting that it embodied the reach of our

dreams. We'd be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a

searchlight if we have faith in ourselves.

The paintings taught me a lot.

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