王乔治-国庆节作文600字作文
Although Ulysses S. Grant and Robert E. Lee
were fierce adversaries
对手
during the Civil
War,
their lives, both military and nonmilitary,
has a great deal in common.
Grant descended
from a family
whose members participated in
the
American Revolution. He received his
commission of second lieutenant
少尉
from
West Point and
served in the
Spanish-American War. He
was later
summoned by President Lincoln
to assume
command of the Union Forces
联盟部队
during the Civil War. After
the Civil War,
Grant suffered financial
problems and was
forced to declare
bankruptcy. Lee also
descended from a
family which engaged in the
American
Revolution. He, too, received his
commission from West Point and later
fought
in Mexico during the Spanish-
American War.
His fame as a military
strategist during the
Civil War, when
he was the commander of the
Confederate
armies,
同盟军
is well known.
Like Grant, he also had financial
difficulties
after the civil War and
was compelled to
declare bankruptcy.
(
整体比较
)
1
比较和对比
（
comparison and contrast
）
比较型作文
比较型作文一般分为说明式比较和议论式
比较两种。说明式比较在比较过程中，作者<
/p>
不发表个人意见，在文中不体现个人取向，
单纯以说明介绍为目的
。
在四、
六级考试中的比较型作文多以议论式
比较的形式出现。
议论式比较以比较事物优
劣、阐明自己
立场为目的，一般分为倾向型
和中立型两种类型。
一、倾向型比较论说文
1.
首段
引言句（第一句）：引出比较的对象
主题句（
第二句）：提出主题，明确表明作
者的个人取向与偏好。
Topic 1:
有人认为大学住宿应该独处一室
2.
有人认为应该与同学合住
3.
我的观点
It is often
difficult for _students_ to
decide
whether they should live alone
or
they
should
live
with
other
students
.
In my opinion, to live with others is
always better.
Topic 2:
幸福的秘诀是找一个最完美的人，
还是找一个最适合你的人，
和他 或她建立一
个最和谐亲密关系？
The
key
to
happiness
is
to
find
a
perfect
person
or
to
find
someone
who
is
perfect
for
you
and
build
a
perfect
relationship
with him or her? In my opinion, to find
someone
who
is
perfect
for
you
is
always
better.
Topic
3:
有人喜欢乡村生活
2.
有人喜欢都
市生活
3.
我的观点
Those
who
prefer
city
life
have
their
own
reasons,while
some other people prefer
country life.
As for me ,both city life
and country
life have merits and
demerits.
Topic 4: 1
．名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2
．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3
．我认为……
People
’
s attitudes toward whether
famous universities should be
open to
turists
or
not
vary
from
person
to
person.
In my opinion, it is a
good idea for
universities to attract
tourists.
2
、主体部分
对比点的笔墨分配：应有所侧重，对于作者
持否定态度的事物的优势要少写，<
/p>
而肯定的
事物的优点则要多用笔墨，
对于其缺点则可
轻描淡写、一笔带过。
Topic 1: (
学生住宿
)
Some
students
don't
like
B
.
First,
they
think ______ because ______. Second,
_______. Third,_________.
The incomparable advantage of A is that
___________. First,___________.
Second,________ .Third,________.
3
、结尾段
=
呼应主题句
强调被肯定事物
的积极作用等
用一句话归纳并突出被肯定事物的重大优
点，进一步确定自己的选择，与主题句相互
照应。
二、中立型比较论说文
首段和主体部分与倾向型比较论说文相同
Topic 1.
1.
有人认为类似于因特网的高科
技产品会代替书籍
< /p>
2.
有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会被取
代
3.
我的看法。
倾向型
1.
有人认为大学住宿应该独处一室
2.
有
人认为应该与同学合住
3.
我的观点
It is often
difficult for ______ to
decide whether
A or B . In my opinion,
A is always
better.
Some
students
don't
like
B
.
First,
they
think ______
because ______. Second,
_______.
Third,_________.
The incomparable
advantage of A is that
___________.
First,___________.
Second,________
.Third,________.
I
regard
A
as
a
precious
opportunity
for
it is the
best way of ___________. And
I
confidently believe that _______.
中立型
1.
有人喜欢乡村生活
2.
有人喜欢都市生活
3.
我的观点
Those
who prefer A have their own
reasons,while some other people prefer
B . As for me ,both A and B have merits
and demerits.
First
and
foremost,__________.
Moreover,
____________. Last but
not least,
_______.
On the
contrary _________. In
addition,___________. What’s the
commonest,________
Either
___________ or a _______gives
_________
.I believe__________
引出不同观点的句型：
1
、
People’s
views
on…
vary
from
person
to person. Some hold
that… . However,
others believe that….
人们对…的观点
因人而异
.
有些人认为….. 然而其他人却
认为．．．
2
、
People may have different opinions
on…
人们对…可能会有不同的见解
.
3
、
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from
person to person.
人们对待吸毒的态度因
人而异
.
4
、
There are different opinions among
people as to… 关于….
人们的观点大不
相同
.
5
、
Different people hold different
attitudes toward (failure). <
/p>
对
(
失败
)
人
们的态度各不相同
.
关于结尾的句型：
1
、
Taking all these factors into
consideration,
we
naturally
come
to
the
conclusion that
…
< br>把所有这些因素加以考虑
,
我们自然会得出
结论…
2
、
Taking
into
account
all
these
factors,
we
may
reasonably
come
to
the
conclusion
that…
< br>考虑所有这些因素
,
我们可能会得出合理的
结论…
3
、
Hence/Therefore,
we’d
better
come
to
the conclusion that…
因此
,
我们最好得出这样的结论…
4
、
There is
no
doubt that
(job-hopping)
has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问
,
跳槽有优点也有缺点
.
5
、All in all, we cannot live without…
But
at
the
same
time
we
must
try
to
find
out
new ways to cope with the problems
that
would arise.
总之
,
我们没有…是无法生 活的
.
但同时
,
我
们必须
寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现
的新问题
.
比较型连接词：
like,
similarly,
likewise,
in the same way, in
the same manner,
equally.
比较型常用句型：
1
．
The advantage far outweigh the
disadvantages.
2
．
The
advantages
of
A
are
much
greater
than
those
of B.
3
．
A may be preferable to B, but A suffers from
the disadvantages that...
4
．
It is reasonable to maintain that ...but it
would be
foolish to claim that.
5
．
A and B has several points in common.
6
．
A bears some resemblances to B.
7
．
However, the same is not applicable to B.
8. A and B differ
in several ways.
9. Evidently, it has
both negative and positive
effects.
10. People used to think ..., but
things are
different now.
11. It is true that A ... , but the
chief faults
(obvious defects )are ...
训练
:
1.
有人认为类似于因特网的高科技产品会代替书籍
2.
有人认为传统的信息产品书籍不会被取代
3.
我的看法。
首段：
引出关于因特网对现代社会的影响
关于因特网
和书籍话题存在的争论
主体段落一：有人偏爱
阅读
传统信息媒体，如书籍
原因
1
：人类文明的历史就是书写的历史
原因
2
：人们可以随处用自己喜欢的姿势
阅读
原因
3
：书写形式更有利于安全保存信息
主体段落二：如因特网之类的现代技术手段的优点
优点
1
：
新科技的出现历来都回给人 类生活带来许多
好处
优点
2
：
电脑新科技的出现，
使信息储备量大大提高
优点
3
：
电脑新科技的出现，
使信息处理的效率提高
了
结尾段
:
：因特网最终会代替书籍等信息手段
Nowadays,the influence of Internet
proves to be
profound.
And
there
has
been
a
very
controversial
debate
as
to
whether
or
not
Internet
will
replace
the book as the main
source of information.
People in favor
of the traditional information
sources
always provide the following evidence .
Firstly,
the
history
of
human
civilization
is
the
written history.
Secondly, people are free to
choose any
posture and place that makes them
comfortable when reading. Finally,
traditional
information soureces like
books are relatively
stable and
reliable to preserve the human
information well.
Conversely,as for the merits of modern
technologies,
in
the
first
place,
in
history
,
we
can
see that every new technology brings about
great changes to our life. Secondly ,
modern
technology like computers is
another great
invention that can store
a huge amount of data .
At
the
same
time
,
We
are
able
to
process
the
data
more rapidly and
accurately than we can ever
imagine.
In
short,
I
agree
that
modern
technology,such
as
the Internet, will come day
replace the written
word as the main
source of information.
Therefore,I am
eagerly looking forward to that
day.
1
．名校校园正成为旅游新热点
2
．校园是否应对游客开放，人们看法不同
3
．我认为……
Should
the
University
Campus
Be
Open
to
Tourists?
熟记的句型：
一．
Helen is the most beautiful girl that
I have
ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。
Mr.
Chang
is
the
kindest
teacher
that
I
have
ever
had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。
二、
Nothing is more important than to receive
education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事。
三、
We cannot emphasize the importance of
protecting our eyes too
much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。
四、
There
is
no
denying
that
the
qualities
of
our
living have gone
from bad to
worse.
不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。
五、
It
is
universally
acknowledged
that
trees
are
indispensable
to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。
六、
There
is
no
doubt
that
our
educational
system
leaves
something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。
七、
An
advantage
of
using
the
solar
energy
is
that
it won‘t
create
(produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。
八、
The reason why we have to grow trees is that
they can provide
us with fresh air.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。
九、
So
形容词
be
主词
that
句子
（如此< /p>
...
以致
于
...
）
例句：So precious is time that we
can‘t afford
to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。
十、
Rich as our country is,
the qualities
of our
living are by no
means
satisfactory.
{by no means = in no way
= on no account
一点也
不
}
虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满
意。
十一、
The
more
books
we
read,
the
more
learned
we
become.
我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。
十二、
By taking exercise, we can always stay
healthy.
借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。
十三、
Listening to music enable us to feel
relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。
十四、
On no account can we ignore the value of
knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。
十五、
It is time the authorities concerned took
proper steps to solve
the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交
通问题的时候
了。
十六.
因为”
The budget is
unrealistic in that it disregards
increased costs.
十七.
只须
(
消)……就能……
We have only to turn to that
extraordinary
discovery
made
by
Edison
to
see
the
significance
of it.
十八
.
Although
many
people
claim
that,
along
with
the rapidly
economic development, the number of
people
who
use
bicycle
are
decreasing
and
bicycle
is bound to
die out. The information I‘ve
collected
over the recent years leads me to
believe that bicycle will continue to
play
extremely important roles in
modern society.
尽管许多人认为随着经济的高速发展，用自行车的人
数会减少，
自行车可能会消亡，
然而，
这几年我收集
的一些信息让我相信自行车仍然会继续在现代社会发
挥极其重要的作用。
二十
. Environmental experts point out that
increasing pollution not only causes
serious
problems such as global warming
but also could
threaten to end human
life on our planet.
环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致
像全球变
暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球
的
生存。
二十一
. In view of such serious situation,
environmental tools
of transportation like
bicycle
are
more
important
than
any
time
before.
考虑到这些严重的状况，我们比以往任何时候更需要
像自行车这
样的环保型交通工具。