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2021年1月26日发(作者：重生1998全文阅读)

上海中考英语作文专题指导

一、中考英语作文写作模式——“四审四注意”写作法

“四审”
：

一审标题文体格式。这样可以为下面的写作，如人称、时态、内容、格式等奠定基础；

二审人称。如是以第一人称
I
或
we
为主还是以第二人称
you
或第三人称
she,
he,
it
或
they
为主；

三审时态。一般而言，写作时文章 应多以现在时（包括一般现在时、一般将来时、现在完成
时和现在进行时）或过去时（一般宜用一般过去 时和过去进行时）为主，切忌时态混乱；

四审内容。
如有提示，应尽量按照所给提示 来写，
不可偏题乱发挥，可将有关内容提炼分解
成几句展开叙述，不可遗漏，这是很重要的一点 ，一般文章按
who
，
when
，
where
，
w hat
，
how
，
why
等要素展开。

“四注意”
：

一注意如果文章没有给出开头结尾，
一定要写开头结 尾。
当然，
开头和结尾的方式不能太落
于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一两句即可，结 尾要点题，有所立意；

二注意句式要富于变化，
不能通篇只有一种句式或句式过于单 调，
否则即使无语言和内容错
误也难得高分，
如可适当运用
if, when, although
等状语从句，
I think / I hope / I believe that
等
宾语从句，如用定语从句必须有绝对把握；

三注意适当运用连接词，如
on one hand, on the other hand; what’s more; however
等，这样使
文章更有层次、更富逻辑性，若语言和内容没问题
,
做到第二、三项“注意”就很有希望拿
组织结构分。

四注意善于运用有把握 的词汇和句型，
尽量运用课本所学词句，
坚决避免不正确的
“中国式
英语”< br>，更不能乱“发明”
,
一般一篇文章能用
8
个左右的好短语或句式已很不错。

最后需要提 醒考生的是，
中考作文要取得高分
,
词数不能太少也不能太多
,
笔者 觉得
,
以
80
词
左右为宜。另外，书写一定要认真、工整，以免造 成不必要的失分。

二、中考英语作文常见语言错误调查分析

1.
时态错误


2.
时间状语错误



3.
名词单复数错误


4.
动词误用



5.
语态错误



6
．

词性误用


7.
介词误用



8
．

某些搭配和惯用法误用



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中考英语总复习专项训练题

写作专项训练

A.
中考英语热门写作话题

1.
关于学习

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
How to learn English well
”
.
（ 以“怎样
学好英语”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

When did you start learning English? (in ... / ... years ago)

●
How do you learn English? (listen carefully, study with a group, read English every day ...)

●

What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar ...)
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2.
关于兴趣

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My interest
”
.
（以“我的兴趣”为题写
一篇不少于
60< br>个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

What is your interest?

●

Why do you like it so much?

__________ _______________________________________________



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3.
关于写事

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
Unforgettable memories
”
.
（以“难 忘的
回忆”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

What is your unforgettable memory?

●

Why do you think it is unforgettable?

_______________ __________________________________________



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4.
关于计划

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My plan for summer holiday
”
.
（以“我
的暑期计划”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday?

●

Give at least two points.

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5.
关于朋友

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My good friend
”
.
（以“我的好 朋友”
为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

Who is your good friend?

●

What do you often do with him or her?

●

Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?

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6.
关于写人

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
My English teacher
”
.
（以“我的英语老
师”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

Who is your English teacher?

●

Do you like him or her?

●

Why do you like him or her?

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7.
关于英语

Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic
“
I changed my ways of learning English
”
.
（以“我改变了我学习英语的方式”为题写一篇不少于
60
个词的短文，标点符号不占格。
）

Use the following points as a reference. (
以下内容供参考
)

●

How did you learn English in the past?

●

Why do you change your ways of learning English?

●

How do you learn English now?
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