教师对学生的评语考研作文超级模板

注：

这是

2015

2015

年考生，考前几

天就在狂背这些模板，英语

61

分，大小作文估计有

21

分

！所以我觉得何老师堪称考研辅

导界

实用派

，感觉其他辅导机构就是在吹牛逼！希望 对

2016

考研学子有用！

一、个人成功品质类话题

第一段：

As is vividly depicted above ,

完全倒装，非谓语动词，定语从句，独立主格

. The topic

reflected in the picture has gone a trending topic on some social media, with many users sharing and

commenting recently. This picture conceals a deeper and far-reaching meaning than it appears to be.

第二段：

Nothing can be compared with

creation or innovation

for the personal growth , especially in the

times of globalization and knowledge explosion. Put it another way

, the spirit of innovation

is a

key ingredient of the modern recipe to success, either for individuals or for a nation. Due attention

to this quality is attached by individuals and even the whole society. People with

the spirit of

innovation

can not only accumulate wealth, but will also establish their career, fit into society, and

even attain social status. No one would deny that,

creation

is truly the fundamental attribute of top

performers, which separates the high achievers from the rest of the pack. (112

字

)

第三段：

For example, Jack Ma, capturing the world focuses with initial public offering of Alibaba,

ascending to the richest man of China, perfectly illustrates the importance of

innovation

in

realizing personal ambition and generating value for the society. Accordingly, we should bear in

mind that

creation

is of great significance to both ourselves and our society. In other words, were

there no

the spirit of

creation

, we would never taste the real happiness of the successful life.

(75

字

)

二、社会话题（正面展开

)

第二段

:

The picture tells us that

volunteer spirit

remains to be an integral part in this ever rapid changing

modern society. These time- honored virtues sustain the continued social progress and support us to

better ourselves in life

while the rapid economic growth is starting to upset the old balance and generate

new challenges

. This human quality is part and parcel to the social development of our nation and its

absence will inevitably inflict great loss on us. There is no doubt that,

volunteer spirit

, kindling the

good nature within us and firing our enthusiasm to create happiness and beauty for the community,

is bound to accelerate the growth of the society.