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高中生申请美国大学推荐信范例
出国留学有几封推荐信
是必不可少的,那么本科留学推荐信要怎么写呢?下面为大家
介绍一下本科留学推荐信的
内容及推荐信范文。
本科留学推荐信的内容:
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1
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申请者的学业成绩或特质 ,是否具有领导才能,是否具有很强的分析能力等。
在这一点上要注意适度,
也不能夸夸其谈过高的估计申请者。
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2
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充分挖掘申请者自身的特 殊之处,例如有很强的沟通能力,或者是擅长某种语
言等。
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3
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就你所了解的范围而言, 该申请者有什么比较重要的成绩或是成就,学业上的
或是其他方面的。
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4
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该申请者是否有何弱项, 例如之前有过某些方面的挫折,但是从这个失败的经
历中获得了什么经验教训等。
(
5
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对申请者未来潜力的描述 ,即解释推荐人愿意对该申请者做出推荐的原因,以
及一旦该申请者获得到该校继续深造
的机会会有什么
发展等。
接下来就可以正式动笔了,
不同的学校对推荐信的要求可能会略 有不同,
但是基本上一
封结构清晰明确内容翔实的推荐信都应该由以下几
个部分组成:
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1
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介绍部份。首先应该清楚 明确的介绍推荐人的情况,工作单位、职位、与被推
荐人的关系以及与被推荐人相处的时
间长短等。
在这一部份也可以给被推荐人一个总体的评
价。
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2
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主体部分。重点讲述被推 荐人一至两个优秀品质,并且用有力的事实证明加以
辅佐。
要注意掌握对 具体事例的选择,
这不是简单的把申请者简历上的经历等内容进行一个
拼
凑,而是要要举出几个最有代表性的能够充分体现申请人人格魅力的例子。
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3
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结论部份。解释为什么申 请人的申请计划是适合他本人的,并且说明你认为该
申请人在未来会对这个被申请的学校
做出什么样的贡献。
最后可以再次强调你对推荐该申请
者充满信心,
p>
为能够推荐他到更好的院校进行深造感到十分自豪,
同时表示学校在审核材料
的过程中可以随时联系你,不要忘记附上你的联系方式。
本科留学推荐信范文:
吴可馨
,2005
年
8
月考入深圳市百年老校南头中学高中部
,
在精英 荟萃的一班就读
,
我有
幸成了她高中阶段第一任班主任、
第一任语文老师、第一任年级组长,得以熟悉并了解她。
可馨有着强烈的进取心和求知欲,
并且很独立、
很主动地设计着自己的人生。
她不喜欢
轻易跟着别人转。在中考结束后大
多数学生都去狂欢放松的时候,她选择了暑期语言进修。
这使她后来的中文成绩、
英文成绩在年级近千名学生中一直遥遥领先
。
她很擅长写作,
< p>这除
了得益于她的想象力和创造力,
更多依赖于她思维的个性和深度 。
她的随笔有一种独特的韵
味和有别于常人的思考,
她不 喜欢写空话,
无论是写自己生活的琐屑,
还是发表对他人、
对 p>
时事的看法,
她绝对说真话。
所以她的文章总是吸引很多人,
大家还常常被她文章中的悲悯
情怀所打动,
一个被辞退的 教师,
一位答不上题的同学,
一只流浪的猫等等,
都会让她顿生< /p>
恻隐之心。
更难得的是,
她还剖析这些事件背后的文化意义 ,
这就使得她身上散发着一种古
老的人文精神,
和她的独 立态度和自由精神一样,
这是她超越同届学生们的地方。
作为一名
热爱读书的女生,
她有很敏感的心,
对语言尤其有一种细腻而透彻的悟性 ,
这使得她的文字
温婉而不失一种张力。
她热爱团队,
有较强的合作能力和组 织能力。
她是学生会社团部部长,
曾策划了社团一
系列活
动,这也显示出她潜藏的领导才华;另外,兴趣的广泛和知识的丰富,以及对工作、
对生
活的热情,也使得她在同学群中颇受欢迎。
因为读书和随笔的原因,我们走得较近,她的聪慧、热情以及诚实、勤勉,给我留下了
< br>很好的印象;
并且教学相长,
她在某种程度上也促进了我教学的发展。 p>
所以在此我诚挚推荐
吴可馨同学入贵校学习,并期待着她的学业、她的人生在
更大的空间里有着更大的发展。
推荐人
:
深圳市南头中学刘耀娟
2008
年
10 p>
月
25
日
某同学与我相处了四年之久,其特
点在我心中如繁天星斗,明灭可辨,却又数之不尽。
某同学与人为善,这向来为众人所称道。入某(你所在中学)中学以来,从未与同学发生
过
争执,更未曾顶撞过老师。他处处与人方便,时时笑脸待人,深得大家的喜爱。即使老
师偶
尔批评他,他也是坦然面对,有时加以解释,而从不恼怒。
某同学喜爱文艺。
在诸多学 科中,
尤以中国汉语见长。
在语文课上,
常常即兴配合课文内容< /p>
进行人物表演。其语文成绩也多次名列班级前矛。久而久之,其表演才能更扩大到了小品、
相声、讲故事等范畴,并数次在学校艺术节上获奖。除此之外,某同学非常爱好音乐,至
今
已学习钢琴多年,
在学校艺术节和家长会上多次表演,
得到了老师、
同学和家长的好评。
上
学期,他与同学合作
,自编、自导、自演,参加了市中学生形象大赛,获得第七名。这个星
期,
他又刚刚和我班另外两位同学一样,
闯入了恒福中学第三届中学生形象大赛个人赛的决
赛。
某同
学热爱运动,
其中篮球是他最喜爱的运动之一。
在班级篮球队里,
他是绝对主力。
虽然
不是太高,但他以灵活,以技术见长。再忙、再累,
也阻止不了他对篮球这项运动的热爱。
某同学喜爱运动,
但并不盲目,< /p>
他的运动很有规律。
除了在校运动之外,
他还定期到附近的
健身俱乐部锻炼。在那儿,他可以跳舞,锻炼肌肉,以及游泳等等。所以某同学总是精力充
沛、形象健康。
在电脑科技方面,
某同学更是显示了异于常人的热情。
为了得到一台电脑 ,
他曾许诺并真正
进入了班级前十名。此后,他很快就成了班级里众多<
/p>
“
电脑技术论坛
”
的中心发言人。
某同学是多才多艺的,
作为 他的老师与朋友,
我感到很自豪。
面对即将离别的现实,
我有些< /p>
不舍。
但我仍然很高兴地将某同学推荐给你们学校。
我相信 他一定会成为你们学校的优秀学
生,并成长为一个真正的男子汉。
在多加一些关于英语方面的内容!说你的英语水平!等等!
下面是一封
Carlton
原创的高中生就读美国大学本科的推荐人推 荐信,历时一整天完成。
推荐信从班主任和物理老师的角度来描述评判
被推荐学生。部分语句和段落可以直接套用。
Recommendation for XXX
Dear
Sir or Madam:
As the
Physic teacher of Miss Han, I have known her for 4
years during which time I’ve
sh
aped a overall image of her. Generally, she’s included in the category of top
-notch
students I’ve ever
acquainted with. Thus, I’m happy to give an
introduction outlining her
junior high
school life here, to enable you to assess her
suitability for acceptan
ce to your
esteemed university.
开头固定模式,
介绍推荐人与被推荐人关系,简要提到推荐人的职位(最重要的一个)。这
一段力求简练
精干。
I taught Miss XXX, where
she left me with an impression of her intellect,
industry and
independent thinking.
During the 2 years in my class, both her
assignments, which are
meticulously
finished, along with test scores on Physics
subject almost always come out
excellent. On the whole, she performed
fairly competitively in most subjects in junior
high.
这一段是从第一个侧面来描述被推荐人,本文是从学术角度评价被推荐人的
。
With a different frame of
reference, I’d like to focus the picture on
h
er merits of art talents
and
perseverance. Her active participation and many
awards in art contests guide me to
speculate about longtime practice of
playing piano and painting which has later been
confirmed by her. It seems that her
serious attitude toward school courses has
something
to do with the art practice.
Though suffering from a broken arm since an
accident in a
sports activity, she
didn’t give up practicing piano and finally passed
the certificate exam
of that year.
Having conversed with her parents about the story,
I come to understand this
connection. <
/p>
与前段不同,
该段描述了被推荐学生在艺术上的才能,
但在 下面一段我们更进一步叙述了被
推荐学生应用其艺术才能为团队做贡献的实例,可谓一石
二鸟。
Not only does she exhibit
many talents but also employs them to aid the
class in various
activities. Assigned
to take charge of activities related to arts, she
fulfilled her duties pretty
well in
selecting songs for the chorus, teaching them word
by word and finally
accompanying their
vocals in the contests. Besides, another case
would prove her an able
student to
balance and make schedules. Even with approaching
final exams and heavy
courses work, she
still kept classroom bulletin board updated by
tips about courses and
instant news
about campus. Probably she takes it as a manner in
which her painting skills
could be
applied while class activities were assisted.
最后强调了被推荐人良好的平衡能力,即使学业紧张,但仍出色完成工作任务。
XXX has been a real asset to Beijing
middle school, both in academics and in
extracurricular activities. I am quite
sure that she will prove equally valuable to your
university, and am convinced that she
will prove an outstanding undergraduate student.
Please do not hesitate to contact me if
you require further information regarding this
remarkable student.
最后一段仍然是模式化的语言。
Tips on
DIY
留学申请推荐信
高中生申请美国大学本科推荐信
Sample
To Whom It May Concern:
I am
very pleased to recommend Martha Holden for
admission to your university program.
As her guidance counselor for three
years I have watched this young woman develop both
academically and personally into a
mature individual ready in every way for her
college
years.
Martha is
bright, energetic, compassionate and genuinely
well rounded. Her grades have
been
consistently above average in all of her courses,
and she has actively participated in
a
diverse assortment of extracurricular activities
ranging from track and field and chorus to
the school yearbook and our drama club.
Martha has also spent considerable time
outside the school involved in the
community.
This has included work with Meals on Wheels and volunteering 10 hours a
week at one of our area's
shelters for battered and abused women.
They think so much of her at the
shelter they have offered her a paid internship
for next
summer. Previously, this
internship had never been awarded to anyone before
the end of
their college sophomore
year. Despite all the preparations that will be
required for going
off to college next
fall, Martha told me she is absolutely thrilled
about this opportunity and
feels it
will enhance her university studies.
Unlike many students who are not sure
which field to pursue, Martha has made clear to us
all that her goal is to do Social Work.
To this end she has worked tirelessly in our pilot
program for mentoring Special Education
students mainstreamed into our school.
In closing, let me take a moment to
recount an incident which I believe speaks volumes
about the superior nature of this
candidate. Two years ago I was returning from
lunch to
my office when I saw ahead of
me in the hallway 90 pound Martha, arms stretched
out
between two 180+ pound students,
one a Special Ed student and the other a school
bully.
Other students were standing by
motionless or laughing while Martha showed the
leadership and courage to immediately
put an end to the embarrassing fight that had
erupted.
It is clear to me
as I hope it is to you that this young woman,
Martha Holden, is an
exceptional
candidate, one that would contribute greatly to
any program. I wholeheartedly
recommend
her and wish her the very best in all future
endeavors.
Sincerely,
Jean
Atkins
Senior Counselor
Alexander Hamilton High School
最好的推荐信样本
SAMPLE
LETTERS (with modifications and deletions in order
to preserve
anonymity)
SAMPLE A